Poem / Tag You're It

in poetry •  7 years ago 

Tag You're It

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Tag you're it
I was the first to get hit
It was sudden like an epileptic fit
There was nothing I could do about it

My heart was tagged
My head showed no flag
There was just a rush of emotion
There was no time to think about this notion

I rushed towards this black hole
I didn't realize how it slowly consumed my soul
There was nothing more mysterious
Than the smile that lay so precariously in front of me

When I realized there was only danger ahead
It was to late I was in over my head
I was being pulled faster than the speed of light
By her gravitational field, I tried my best to fight

I couldn't do anything
I was rendered useless
All my light was sucked from me
I was left in the dark with no way to see

I learnt then and there
Tag was a game that had no fear
You played with one risk
To fall into a black abyss

Never play alone
Running after one will leave you beat to the bone
There's more to life than toxicity
Run if you feel that everything is made simple by complexity
As beautiful as it may seem
Your heart is worth more than any amount of green
You are who you are
Don't chase after a faded, destructive star

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By Ethan
2017/10/09

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My heart was tagged.
Emotions became ragged.
My dreams of you and i were marred.
Nothing left of us, just scars.

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oh really motivatid from you @josediccus you are so nice

Fantastic poem I have given you a follow and an upvote sorry it isn't much but it's all I have.

It might not be much but it mean the world, thank you for your time :D

nice

@xxsenpaixsamaxx Really excellent post.

Really it's fantastic
Wonderful
Thanks for sharing

Harika yazı thank you 🙏

Excellent post

I love it! ^^

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Good poetry

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

@xxsenpaixsamaxx -- This felt like a rap song. Nicely done.

this poem was so sweet it meant so much it made me think of my boyfriend and couragre me to write a poem about him thank you for a wonderful poem to read this really terffic.

Its easy to get through emotions as if I can feel the text. Thank you for this!