Poem / Tell Me What You Want

in poetry •  7 years ago 

Tell me what you want

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T ell me what you want
E verything you desire
L et it all out, show me your hearts fire
L et it all go, let the words flow

M ost of the time you just stair
E very second, a thought impairs

W hat can I do to
H elp you to achieve
A ll the success you seek
T ell me your plan for the future

Y ou're a beacon shedding your light
O ut to all those who doubt the
U nreliable thoughts their minds spout

W hen you one day choose
A ll will follow you on your cruise
N othing will come in between you and your dream
'T il you make that fantasy a reality

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By Ethan
2017/08/19

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😍 let it all out , show me ur hearts fire .
Beautiful, can sense the feeling of wanting to be a part of her/his dream , helping to achieve it as she/he breaks it all to u, and to implant in their soul that nothing can stop from achieving it.

:) I like the way you interpret this, it shows that my messages are coming through

I'm glad :-)

Very nice...This is helpful for me. Thanks for writing.

Damn you good 🔥

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  ·  7 years ago (edited)

cute.. with Yuri looking down while scrunching a pencil

Nice, thank you for sharing1

Beautiful.

Hi another great post! :)

Please could you take a look at my latest poem: https://steemit.com/poetry/@laurabean/the-fear-of-love-poems-from-pain-by-laura-bean-poetry I will be interested to hear your comments.

Very nice! :-)

This poetry is very profound, a true art. I'm glad to meet people as talented as you

i like your words Ethan but also like the sketches to well done thanks for sharing

Sometimes it is hard when the significant other doesn't express what they want or need. All you can do is wait patiently. Just being there when needed is the best. I love your poem. It reflects what most people go through. Have a nice Sunday Ethan! :D

Thank you :D I hope you have a good week further as well :)