You and Me - pt 1
I beg your pardon kind sir
Would you step aside
So that I may pass by
I am in a hurry
And you're stopping my scurry
Excuse me Little one
Why the rush when the sun is nearing gone?
I am on the way to my place of refuge
I wish to retire after my long day
I have been at work and would like to be on my way
I apologize for the inconvenience
But you don't seem the kind
To work at such a time
Yes Indeed I may not look it
But I am older than what you think
Now may I request again
To go humbly on my way?
Yes, yes. Let me not hold you up
Thank you
Excuse me again
you seem to be blocking my way
Are you the one from yesterday?
Yes I am
Why is it you stand here
Looking devoid of cheer
I stand here
because I can
I stand here
because I am no longer a man
How so?
Your eyes have lost their glow...
This was the place
Where I first saw her face
And now?
She's become a sow
I question whether I should ask
It's fine it's in the past
The way you stare into the distance
It must've been recent
You have no shame
To ask the contents of my brain
I want to know
Why so much emotion you show?
I must go
I have to get home
Farewell little one
And with that the sun was gone...
By Ethan
2017/08/27
wow... nice poem i read today. i think i feel enjoy with your poem.
Regards
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upvoted and resteemed your post @ xxsenpaixsamaxx
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upvoted master you done it again..nice poem indeed ...the flow was right..kindly see my poem also..https://steemit.com/poetry/@mrblu/the-blupost-poem-look-unto-my-eyes
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Thank you will do :D
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Crafted excellence! This one deserves to be resteemed :)
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Excelente poema lo traducirse al español y se lo enviaré a alguien especial
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good poem
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Wow xxsenpaixsamaxx This is a good post, I really like poetry 👍.I have followed you and upvoted..kindly hoping for your encouragement as well (Blessings❤)
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Thank you :D leave me a link and I'll always check it out
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You are good,i like your blog. Thank you for sharing @xxsenpaixamaxx
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AWESOME !!! , great post buddy,, keep it @sxxsenpaixsamaxx
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I love it . Thank you for sharing . The picture helps imagine the poem
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I take a lot of time finding the right poctures to accompany the poems
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interesting, I love it
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You are a very sensitive person, it feels like you are writing poems from your soul.
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A soul encompasses your entire body, the poems come from the mind wich is part of the soul... these are experiences I wish to have, in essence they are my desires straight from my soul.
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You're a poet!
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https://steemit.com/life/@ghyassine/follow-me-and-upvote-my-post-why-because-i-ll-do-the-same#comments
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Magnifico! Bravo!! Excellente!!! ^^
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Ethan, this was a very nice poem and I liked the interchange between the young person and the older man. It is a nice take on life . Your poems are evolving and becoming even more reflective. I love the change! :D
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I loved the eb and flow of this and how you conveyed the slow unmoving contrasted with the fast hurrying. I don't understand the line about the sow. Maybe I read it too quickly I'll give it another go.
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A sow is a female pig that has had piglets
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I know what a sow is. I just don't understand that particular line. I'd like to understand it though. Could you open my eyes?
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I was inferring that she went away and got married to another man and had childrens
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Gotcha! Well, again. Well done. Really liked your poem :)
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Oh this is so beautiful. I love it
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Nice
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Would you look at my post and help him ..?
Your poetry is good and interesting, I love this poety
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Good poetry .. Motivated once
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This poetry is very beautiful, and I like it a lot! keep up the great work!
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Very touching to make me touched
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You did it again @xxsenpaixsamaxx. ^^ This is a very nice poem! How I love the way the story flows within it. Very nicee I super like it. I would love to read more of your works! Yosh! ^^~
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Domo arigato I will continue to share :D
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Looking forward to it! Gambatte Kudasai! ^^
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Wonderful I hope to be in touch
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Great post
Keep it up
I love it.
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Very nice poetry @xxsenpaixsamaxx
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