Poem / Your last line

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

Your last line

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Grab me by the arm
Embrace me with your alluring charm
Smile at me one last time
As I portray you in one last line

Be the muse of my insanity
Be the antidote that brings me clarity
Enjoy the evening as my own
And then, with my heart, return home

Look me in the eye
Through the room we'll glide
Stare deep into my insides
As you blatantly, but beautifully, tell me lies

Kiss me as you leave
As I prepare to grieve
Thoughts of your last line
Scramble in my mind

The end to you
The end to what I felt
The end of things I'd do
On my knees I knelt

Glad to wash the blood off from this crime
Welcome to your last line

Note: If there are any spelling errors or things you disagree with, I would appreciate it if you let me know :)

By Ethan
2017/12/24

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I love this nice extra dose of morbidity to my holidays, the fourth in 2 days! AWESOME!!! Great job again, namaste :)

Breathe like it's your last breath of life,
cry like it's your last tear from earth.
Love your mate like it's never going to be again.

You never know when life will take you by surprise,
don't ever put off today what you can do tomorrow.
If we all put things off till tomorrow,we might not live to
see that day come.

great post

Nice Poem @xxsenpaixsamaxx

good poetry

What a wonderful poetry you have

How i wish.....nice rhyme scheme

nice poetry@xxsenpaixsamaxx

Your last line is sweet and fine :p

Ethan:

Love and life are messy things indeed. It is the long road, not the short ride that tells the truest tale.
lessons-learned

Really love the way the poem was constructed and the manga animated image used. Good job sharing. You can also view my poems too @johnakharia you would love them

the poem is good

That was a really good work!

Wahhhh. It's very well versed and those lines just rocks, i mean they will make you read this poem over and over again. <3 Subarashii desu! ^^ LOVED IT.