Mein Gedicht: "Heimat"

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

Der Tau noch auf den Halmen weilt
Das Morgenrot den Himmel teilt
Da ich in der Fremde aufgewacht
Die ich zur Heimat mir erdacht

Tausend Bilder strömen in mich ein
Mich küsst der warme Sonnenschein
Lass durch die Finger Grashalme gleiten
Die Gedanken in Frieden begleiten

In kühler Nacht die Seele bebt
Eindrücke in Erinnerung eingewebt
Musik schwimmt im Himmel überall
Momente fliegen rasch im Schall

Ich hoffe mein Gedicht hat euch gefallen. Ich habe es 2012 beim Reisen in Neuseeland geschrieben.

Viel Licht und Liebe <3

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Sehr schön :-) Resteemed :-)

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Danke <3

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      ·  7 years ago 

    so schön

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Vielen Dank ;)

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        ·  7 years ago 

      I don't speak German ...I used Google translate
      .... :)

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Sehr schönes Gedicht. Neuseeland da möchte ich auch noch unbedingt hin!

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Vielen Dank ;) Ich kann es sehr empfehlen. Ein wunderschönes Land. So viele wunderbare Landschaften :)

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Worte aus der Seele, Congratulations!

        I've learned a little german but long time ago..:)

        Steem on >:D<!

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Vielen Dank ;)

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Amazing.

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Thank you :)

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              ·  7 years ago 

            Very nice.
            I love it.
            Have a Nice Day ...

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                ·  7 years ago 

              Woh, toll :-)

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                sehr schön :D

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  very beautiful ...
                  i am back ...

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    Vielen lieben Dank Yoga, ich habe Dein Gedicht gelesen. Eindrücke in Erinnerung eingewebt.

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                        ·  7 years ago (edited)

                      Mir gefällts :D

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                          ·  7 years ago 

                        Es gefällt mir. Ich habe es auch resteemed ...

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                            ·  7 years ago 

                          Ein klares upvote für das schöne Gedicht. :-)

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                              ·  7 years ago 

                            Wie schön <3

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                                ·  7 years ago 

                              Sehr schöne Zeilen. Wer denkt dabei nicht gleich an seinen letzten Urlaub zurück. Ich tat es...............danke

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                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                Schönes Gedicht!
                                Neuseeland ist eines der schönsten Reiseziele überhaupt :)

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                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                  beautiful

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                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                      Thank you <3

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                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                            Thank you :) I followed you too ;)

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