"Who is speaking?" (original poem)

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

There is a voice in my head
Telling me what I should do.
Can I believe in what it said?
Is that voice me or is it you?

There is movement in my throat
And I assume it causes speech.
Who has taught me this keynote?
Is there someone I can reach?

There are sounds in my ear,
Forming words within, without
How do I know what I do hear?
Is there meaning without doubt?

There is an echo in my brain
Memories speaking on and on.
Will they make me go insane?
Can they last when I am gone?

I hope you enjoyed this poem I just wrote. The picture above was taken by @organicfilms and shows @sature and me. I wish all the best to you and as always:

Lots of Light and Love <3

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I love your poems.

@yoganarchista - You are an easthetic person ma'm. Really love your skills and the poem. :) It is really good. Therefore, I wish to ReSteem your post ma'm.

+W+ [UpVoted & ReSteemed]

I am flattered with your nice compliments :) Thank you very much <3

Hey! So thrilling that you know some other steemians on the real world! Beautiful poem, the best thing we can do is to listen to those signals and create a path while doing so, and yes, they will perdure even after we are gone...

I have the strange feeling that everything is everlasting or everescaping ;) Thank oyu for your words. It is weir that I tend to write things that might sound desperate when I am actually in a good mood (like lately) and happy stuff when I am in a more desperate state ;D Interesting to watch :D

beautiful poem. love is the way. upvoted and followed. feel free to check out my contents and follow me back. thank you

Thank you very much :) I agree <3 I will check out your blog now :)

There are answers in those questions for me
for all of us to find
I started to see
that my thoughts rewind
when I ask
take of my mask
and be open minded
I cannot be blinded
by ignorance no more
questions are groth for sure

Thank you for your awesome poem :)

Very good poem @yoganarchista

Cheers :)

Ok my friend. I already shared :-)

Es wird langsam Zeit all deine tollen Gedichte, Geschichten zu sammeln und in ein Buch zu veröffentlichen :*

Gute Idee ! Ich hab die meisten, die ich hier auf steemit veröffentlicht hab gar nicht irgendwo anders gespreichert. Das wird ein gefriesel die rauszusuchen. Aber lohnt sich bestimmt. Es gibt auch andere News. Wir müssen die Tage mal wieder skypsen. Nur heute gehts nich mehr... muss schon wieder so bald raus morgen.

wie hast du denn das Bild gemacht? super mit der Spiegelung , upvotd

Ich hab es nicht gemacht sondern ein Kameraman der gerade ein Prsktikum bei @organicfilms macht. Das gif hab ich bei gifmaker.me erstellt

Cool

Thanks :)

I like it, great question in the last part👌

The voice was saying, you can do it what ever it takes, just keep going on, don't lay down your shield and spear yet. You have hope... the voice is saying. I really love your poem. You are so creativr on making it.

so nice poem, @yoganarchista !!! I love the picture too, it's perfect with the poem!

Great piece @yoganarchista. I enjoy reading your poetry very much.

Very good poem @yoganarchista

Oh hätte ich fast verpasst. Resteemed :-)

Love both, the poem and your photo so connected with nature that you're almost dissolved in it!:)
<3