10SBD poetry contest (my first kiss) by @steemhive

in poetry •  7 years ago 

MY FIRST KISS

It was a cold September night;
In shining armor, he came like a knight;
Sweet promises, he swore with his might;
Bidding that I abandon my fright.

I still remember it like it was just yesterday;
His tall frame, standing in front of me like a crane;
Slowly, his hands came up my face;
Cradling both sides, making me feel like a babe.
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The moment I had dreamt of for years;
Paled greatly in comparison, to the fireworks that exploded in my chest;
The moment his lips touched mine, feeding my yearns;
I felt the electricity, firing my nerves.

Much too soon, it was over;
But he followed my lips, leaning closer;
Really though, there was so much saliva;
And right there I decided, maybe no more, ever.
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You so on point like decimal

Wow! I feel this one!! Nice work you gat here!!!

Thanks my dear

Wow! What can i say?

Say something sir.

Hahahahahaha

😂😂😂🤣 hahhahahh what a punch line "too much saliva" -- chai! 🙆This girl is very wicked! In fact, wucked! 🤣

🤣🤣🤣 lol I'm so elated to see you here sir.thanks for stopping by. This means so much to me

i'm speechless right now.

Why?

Nothing oo. just coughin ..

wow, you must be a genius

Hehehehe....thanks

A wonderful piece dear....... Keep steeming dear

Thanks dearie. I love your poems too

I felt this way after my first kiss too
Like it was over hyped

Is the contest over?

Yeah. They usually make it look like it is something special but it is not. Contest is still on

The first contestant in the 10sbd poetry contest.

Congratulation your entry is valid....

Thank you so much.

How precious the first kiss will always be! Good luck in the contest!

You are right ma'am. It's a pleasure seeing you here. Hope you are having a good birthday. Thanks for the wishes.

Zizi zizi the kissee

The moment his lips touched mine, feeding my yearns;
I felt the electricity, firing my nerves.

By the way, i wont mind giving you the second kiss. It will be far much better than d first kiss that only gave you only electricity firing in ur nerves... The second kiss, will give you both lightning and thunder storm in your nerves... 😂

But, really d poem is lovely, wishing you the best in the contest..

Hehehehe. You are very funny and pleasant to read. Thank you so much for stopping by. We might do that second kiss🤔

Looking forward to it.. Our euronation poet.. Happy Sunday.

Happy new week dear.

Cool

Thank you for stopping by

Nice rhymes

I like this

Good write babe

You are great