I was nominated for this poetry challenge by @mariannewest.
Poetry is something that I fully enjoy... Although I am struggling yet again with a migraine, I did not want to fail in producing something, however small. If it's a little ambiguous, please forgive me. Enjoy.
Truth of Souls
We are caught between earth and stars,
Lives shapen by aches and cares
Moving as by wings lifted,
White music in our ears.
If light should pass between us,
And wind could brush our hearts
The notes may trill as nightingales
In a random, whirling rush.
The message placed
Bears a melted stamp
The truth of souls
Transparent.
In flames of a fading
Oiled lamp
Our lives but dreams we're making.
Challenge rules:
Write down one poetry every day for 7 days
use the tag: #poetrychallange
nominate a one user every day.
Today, I nominate @dswigle
The Make a Minnow project is an initiative designed to reward those who are exceptional in the minnowsupport community, the prize is a 5k delegation for a month!
Lovely words as ever Janelle.
Feel better babe ❤️
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Thank you, I love your feedback, dear.
I'm really hoping to get a handle on this by the end of the day so that I can work tomorrow.
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Wow , This poetry is so mind waving and fascinating . Thanks @wandrnrose for sharing with us :)
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I liked how the abstract elements gradually slipped into more concrete lines and images. It gave me the perception of a spirit coming down from the heavens. Nice write.
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That is a beautiful piece of poetry @wandrnrose7!! Thanks for sharing and I'm glad I got to read it today!! xoxo
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Your appreciation means a lot....hugs
Thank you <3
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You're very welcome!!
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<3<3
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wow your words are beautiful my friend..@wandrnrose7.
This poem is enough to share for a month. You don't need seven days.
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That is so kind of you and I thank you so much. These words fuel me to keep sharing my heart. <3
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i'm so glad to feel your heart by your words .. my friend @wandrnrose7
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That means a lot to me.
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I love your use of approximate rhyme. It really makes the poem sing.
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Your words impressed me so much :) Thank you
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Thank you very much for reading and for the beautiful comment. Much love!
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You definitely deserve a big thumbs up for this poem..... ❤️liked it very much keeo steeming!!
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I am just here smiling at each line!
Great poetry. Beautiful piece :)
Get well 💚
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I'm so happy you enjoyed this. It's funny how my brain works in a migraine but I can still write some poetry. Sometimes I'm not quite sure if it makes enough sense to other people. But it comes none-the-less like a river. Thank you for your kind words.
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Wonderful as usual! :D
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Hugs... thank you, you are the sweetest. I hope you are doing well. I will chat you soon.
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Oh, you know how much I love the rhythm of your words and the meaning hidden behind them.
You never disappoint. Love to you.
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Thank you, Denise. You are always so kind and I am so happy when I see your smiling face. You are one of those who always gets my meaning. It tells me a lot about you <3
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XOXO
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<3 <3
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That's a really great poem! I write very simple poetry and I love you read other peoples to get into what their feeling, kudos on your poem❤️
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting... I always like your feedback. It leaves me feeling so appreciated... That means a lot! hugs
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Beautiful, sweet and adorable poetry.
Thank you so much for writing this.
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting, my friend. Much love!
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Well done! You certainly have a way with words :)
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Thank you for that wonderful compliment! I'm so happy that you liked my poem <3
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This is beautiful!!! You rock, my friend!! and we need you to get rid of those migraines!!
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Thank you so much for tagging me... It's a good push to make myself write. And yes, I would like nothing more than to rid myself of these horrible migraines this year. In years past I've had them, but it has been so long since I've gotten them this severely. January 23rd I go to speak to a neurologist about getting Botox injections. I really don't want to do it, but I don't seem to get any relief from anything else.
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So smooth and well written, I enjoyed reading this:-)
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as Always such beautiful poetry
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Thank you, dear @tattoodjay. I always appreciate your thoughts. <3
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My pleasure to visit
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Beautiful Janelle!!!! Happy new years!
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Thank you so much dear! I hope you are well and happy New Year!
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❤❤❤
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Very thoughtful and deep poem!
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Thank you so much for stopping and for the beautiful review. I appreciate it so much!
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You are welcome!
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<3
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This was great Rose! It put me in mind of Dickinson, and that's always a real win in my book!
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I can't believe I have been compared to Dickenson! Thank you for even putting me close! I admire her very much. <3 hugs!!
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Me too so thank you for reminding me of her 😊❤️
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My pleasure <3 ;)
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If light should pass between us,
And wind could brush our hearts
The notes may trill as nightingales
In a random, whirling rush
really sweet line @wandrnrose
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Thanks for commenting @geke
I'm so glad you liked it!
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You are always sharing your good soul dear @wandrnrose7 ...beautiful still you are !
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Thank you @sweetcha, my dear friend, for your sweet words... I appreciate you stopping and reading. I'm glad that the words speak to you.
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What a beautiful poem.
i love it, Thanks for sharing This.
have a Great day My dear
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Thank you, dear!
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