Winners of Steemit Poetry Contest #9

in poetrycontest •  7 years ago 



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My Greetings To You!




About Prizes:


First Place - 7 SBD

Second Place - 6 SBD

Third Place - 5 SBD

Fourth Place - 4 SBD

Fifth Place - 3 SBD

Sixth Place - 2 SBD

Seventh Place - 1 SBD






The winners of the Steemit Poetry Contest #9



Assigning the theme of this episode, I thought about the holidays - joy, fun, happiness... but it turned out as it turned out.






1st Place - "The bloody Christmas in QUETTA" by @aaqib11b



Like a secret crumbled in the sandy shore .......

Christmas came back with all its furore......

Like a butterfly in the midst of love.......

Bombed the nation with a single blow.....



Oh god...came to church for peace....

Why did the Bible tasted my blood

All because I belong to you....

Enough the blood to make it flood....



They came in to kill us in the house of Lord.....

So was religion,so is God .....

We stand firm on the flakes of snow.....

To celebrate the Christmas blow.....






2nd Place - "The Joys of (Red) Christmas" by @steemedchitty



Christmas has come here once again,

to spread the gift of joy.

But Christmas may have come in vain!

The devil with us toys.



A big red fat man on a throne

his red fat elves instructs.

Give stolen gifts from sources plenty,

our conscience to obstruct.



But New Year's Eve is coming soon,

as tensions remain taut.

Will I hear a different tune?

And will I choose the song?






3rd Place - "Resolve it again" by @danmaruschak



It's time for a new year and new resolutions

And I don't mean 4K or 1080p.

But I wouldn't mind if, without attribution,

Secret Santa got me some technology.



No, no, self-improvement not more mass consumption

Is truly what this time of year calls out for.

Though passing up cookies and feasts? Not an option,

And now that you offer I would like some more.



Cultivate virtue, that's what I plan on doing,

Just as soon as I open this gift here for me.

You can test my resolve, there's goals I'm pursuing.

Or there will be, at least, once we take down the tree.






4th Place - "Merry Christmas" by @dagger212



"Mommy, where's Santa? Did he not come last night?"

Asked my 6 and my 4 year old, breathlessly waiting.

"We've tried to be good and we've tried not to fight,

and we've done all our chores 'thout complaining."



What do I tell them? Oh, what do I say?

That their food and the rent are their toys?

The hope in their eyes on this greatest of days

Breaks my heart. How to let down my boys?



A knock on the door, it's the old man upstairs

Says he saw Santa's list with a wink.

From a bag at his side he pulls three unwrapped treasures.

"Merry Christmas," he whispers then leaves.






5th Place - "What Happened To Christmas?" by @Lymmerik



Have you seen my Christmas? I've misplaced it, I fear.

Well, I'm only sixty, and I left it right here!

It was only one week before the New Year.

It can't have gone far, it must be still near.



I called the North Pole, no answer, I swear.

I can't even reach Olive, the other reindeer.

What happened to Christmas? It's finally clear.

A commercialized relic, now wrapped in cashmere.



I looked high and low, in fact, everywhere.

In October I found it, now isn't that queer?

So now if you listen, shhh listen, you'll hear.

Merry Christmas to all, from Lymmerik with Cheer!






6th Place - "Time's Tidings Ticking To Two-Thousand and Eighteen" by @belovebelight



Time, its pace unknown, as it reaches its hand to lend,

Silent as snow, the year creeps quickly to an end.

Lending a feeling of infinite possibilities and progress,

For the end of the year, it will now digress.



Time for reflection but too many are busy,

As everyone frantically buys items in a tizzy.

Holiday cheer and loving embrace by those close,

Raising hands to clink with a toast.



Time to find peace within, while spreading joy,

Great tidings to every age; fully-grown as well as girl and boy.

Finding that second to cherish and love,

Keeping ever thankful for the blessings from above.






7th Place - "A Wish" by @fishyculture



Twinkling lights under blanket of snow,

Fireplace crackling and no where to go.

Watching the flakes as they pile up deep,

Snuggling in for a cozy night's sleep.



Morning comes children and squeals of delight,

Somebody stuffed all the stockings last night!

The tree is surrounded with gifts, large and small,

The home filled with laughter and song, wall to wall.



Too many people will have none of this,

No one is looking at their Christmas list.

I give them this wish and it is most sincere:

May you be greatly blessed in the upcoming year!






Rules of The Contest!


  • Only one entry is allowed.

  • Your entry-post must be tagged both #poetry and #poetrycontest

  • The Title must be "SteemitPoetryContest #(with the number of the actual episode)" + the name of your poem.

  • You can use any types of rhyme - End rhyme, Cross rhyme, Internal etc.

  • The size of the poem - three quatrains (one quatrain = four lines).

  • Do not steal! The contest is only original works!






I wish everyone good luck and creativity!





Let's make STEEMIT more interesting and varied together!



Sincerely, Terry Craft.



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Steemit Poetry Contest? I didn't even know this existed. Great guys! @maya7

I love this!!

I also want to join the contest in future to help build the poetry community. How can I join?

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great contest.... congratulations to the winner

Thanks, Terry, for a great contest. It's a good thing you changed the payout structure or I would have just missed again. :-) Merry Christmas and thanks for all the work you put into this. It's very much appreciated!!!

Thank you! You doing great!

Wonderful and congratulations to all who are winners they did great job.
Best wishes are with you for future too

Can you please vote my comment on this contest? Pleaseee? Thanks.

https://steemit.com/contest/@pritambanikk/win-5-steem-for-a-short-write-up-contest-small-giveaway

@moonsoleil This is perfect for you to get your inspiring poetry out there :)

Is the contest still on? pls someone reply me

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Thank you @terrycraft, it is wonderful to see my poetry was selected. Much gratitude! Be well and blessed!

:-*

Thanks @terrycraft! I really appreciate that you liked my humble rhyme. It carries truth, and heart, and if it's reached you, then I rejoice.

I also rejoice about the 6SBD, mind you, haha! Thanks, for real.

I might have written something somewhat dark, but I wish you and the rest of the participants a merry christmas, steemmas and whatever it is you celebrate around this time.

Much joy with your loved ones and with yourselves!

Hey.

In Russia, too, everything is not so pink... yes, your poem touched me.

P.S. Is it Karl Marx on picture or I mistake?

Haha, it is, it is. I always found it funny that he sported a Santa-level beard and is also quite related to the color red, so I just decided he was a good fit for that poem.

You really try in choosing the winners because all of poet make sense indeed.i appreciate you for lifting people up using this contest.

I try to do the right things. I really hope that I'm on the right path.

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Congrats @aaqib11b @steemedchitty @danmaruschak @dagger212 @Lymmerik @belovebelight @fishyculture. Really solid poetry.
I appreciate you @terrycraft for bringing these talents to lime light.

First congrats to the winners. But most of all, thanks to @terrycraft for this. It has been a productive contest at least for me. Even when one doesn't win anything, the fact that it kept the creative juices flowing was great. Thanks. See you next year.

Thank you for such right words!

Best wishes!

Terry.

Congrats to the winners! I'm new to Steemit. I would love to enter the next contest. Following, so I can watch out for the next one.

Thanks for choosing me .....ist position.....means a lot to me......and thanks for all the love you gave us ....it's truly amazing and prompts me to work even harder......poetry is peace.....so is love

People should not forget that while they are enjoying life, there are those - other people, for whom, regardless of the time of year or holiday, everything can be terrible!

Also, I personally know some Muslims... however, as with Christians. The fault lies not in the religion, but in fanatics!

That's where love comes in ...... TERRORIST has no religion..... TERRORISM in itself is a religion.....These days .....everyone....from president trump to Israeli PM ....everyone is a terrorist.....

Sir.....giving me this much respect..means a lot to me.......I want to show the world that even refugees can make a mark.......but I m a minnow.......sir....if u could just help me a bit so that I can build a name for myself....bcz ....poetry is the only thing that I do with all my heart .....but u know.....in case of a minnow account it can't feed u ...can't pay your bills.....that's y I do steeming.....but .....I m not getting anything out of this ...I m unable to do anything for my fellow refugees....if you just help me a bit with this thing that will be your most kindness......consider it as a request or something else.....on part of the whole refugee community living over here

This is an amazing idea

Some amazing poetry yet again! It is beyond me how you ever manage to chose winners! I loved Merry Christmas by @dagger212 and am so glad to see it came in 4th. A really moving selection of poems to reflect on this Christmas, thank you! As fun as it is to enter, I love reading all the winning entries and discovering all these great poets out there.

So, what's the theme for the next contest again ?
Didn't understand what you said in the begining . Sorry about that :)

Hi!

It's only results of #9 Next one (#10) will be after holidays - in 2018. I will be not at home for week or 10 days, so I cannot hold contests for this time.

Oh.. Thanks. I will be waiting for the next contest then ! :D

Poetry is life.... It makes you feel the nature and its existence @poetrycontest

Poetry is life.... It makes you feel the nature and its existence @poetrycontest

I found out too late this contest was going, :-) Nice that people made so much effort to win this contest. Thanks to all contributing to this contest it is nice to read. When there are any people interested in a contest, about showing off their presents, please look at my page? I do a contest but it does not work and it will be only going for a week. @terryCraft when this is not suitable as reply within your contest please ask me to remove my reply. I do not want to be intruding.

Congratulations to all the winners.

To those who didn't win:
"Losing is part of the game. If you never lose, you are never truly tested, and never forced to grow." - David Sirlin

Good post, I am a photographer, it passes for my blog and sees my content, I hope that it should be of your taste, you have my vote :D greetings

Thank you! Happy New Year to you and yours!

And you ^ ^

Hi Terry,
for #poetrycontest 10: does the poem have to be 12 lines, or up-to twelve lines?

Great post there, keep up good work !

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Please when is the next contest. Unfortunately i just found out about it. Thanks

@terrycraft,
Thank you for an awesome contest. Congratulations to all the winners and thanks to all the participants.
@Lymmerik