This is my entry to @poetrydice challenge week 23 by @robyneggs with the theme "memories"
UNWRITTEN MEMORIES
Someday, I thought maybe I could be free
Oh! no, here I am, everything still look real
I thought my mind could be sealed
But no, those memories still flow in
I still remember the time we spent under that mango tree
At the outskirt of venice
Even as we are distance apart, still this memories outrule our territories
I still remember the day we were holding hands in Florida
Yes, that same day I bought you blossoms flowers
This makes me wonder
Why these memories stick to my head like iron to a magnet
Even as we still chat
On the telephone or on palmchat
In a large distance apart
Our memories feels close like we are on the same position on earth
These memories measure beyond guages
Even if it was written in books
Believe me, a thousand pages will be used
Thank you for reading, hope you enjoyed it
Written by @alumhydro>
Cheers! Your composition is superior. I really enjoyed your English version. It is fun for me to imagine how it would change if I could read and understand it in your native tongue...Thanks for participating and making this into something for yourself, that you are proud of!! :-) Its truly special, coming from your unique perspective.
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Thanks a lot @robyneggs I am really glad you like it........ Do you mean in my native language?, lol... believe me, you wouldn't be able to read that
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This is absolutely beautiful and touching. Top notch, for sure! Eloquent and full of imaginative imagery. Excellent entry this week, thanks for joining us!!
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