I have keys to the lock says the devil
To make your life sizzle instead of fizzle
Drink from the fountain of youth
Holding a scale, I am telling the truth
Take a nap in the jungle
Slice the apples at angles into rectangle
Eat it with honey
That will make you horny in matrimony
If that sounds fishy
Billy the Aussie is doing that in Bali
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Having read both a couple times, I'd say this is the stronger of the two, 'holding a scale, I'm telling the truth' is my favorite line. It sings to me about justice, and also people who only speak truth when they know they are holding the evidence to back it up. Nice stuff, best of luck in the competition.
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Thank you for your comments. I enjoyed writing and reading poetry. We should visit each other more often since we shared common interest. Following you now.
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Great poem!!
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Thank you very much.
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Nice article :)
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Thank you. Glad you enjoy my post
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Cool, completely different from mine. Nice!
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Oh yes, we all have different ideas and perception.
I am happy that this contest is bringing more interaction among the poets in this community. I have always enjoyed writing and reading poetry.
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Wow very nice postngan, I really liked your post, thanks for sharing.
@positivesteem
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Thanks buddy. But you did not vote for me.
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I enjoyed reading this. Hahaha. Superb @positivesteem!
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We should check out each other poems more often.
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Yes yes. We should.
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fine poem :)
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Lol your imagery is trippy! Very original :)
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Thanks for your compliments.
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Got to love some good old poison fruit!
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Thanks for your comments and for dropping by.
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Everyday I love your posts . Great work
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Thanks my friend. I have just checked out your work too. Beautiful photographs. Following you.
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Thank you (:
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Thanks @positivesteem. I think I'd be the first to cave in to temptation, but maybe I don't give myself enough credit. Great poem!
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Who does not want to remain youthful our whole life. After all we are all human.
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I was reading this to a certain melody like a rap music! Awesome! ^^
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Then it can become lyrics for a song
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Definitely! :)
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Great. I like your post D. Thanks for sharing .will you like to give a visit on my post too.
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Thank you so much my friend.
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saw your two entries and i like this one more. :) the other one is good too. but i love the words and rhyming use in this one. :) Upvoted. :)
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Thanks, for this particular poem, I took great effort to make the words rhyme.
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I liked=))
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Thank you my friend. Please follow me for more.
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Well=))
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Thanks for your second entry this week! :-) You rock! Steem-on @positiveesteem.
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Most welcome. And do keep on the good work.
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I love your slant here. Good work. :)
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Wonderful poem though I still try to grasp the meaning. I used to write poems when I was younger. Maybe will share one or two in my future posts 🙂
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The meaning of this poem is intentionally left open ended, can be interpreted according to the reader's experience. Would loved to read your poems.
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