Poetry Slam Challenge 11: My True Love

in poetryslamchallenge •  8 years ago 

I write this in many tears 

I found the love of my life 

And I thought he would never let me go 

So I give this bottle to you 

And this bottle found you 

What a lucky bottle 

He was my whole world 

And now to this bottle 

You are the whole world 

Please don't throw this bottle away 

And leave without a second thought

Because he left me and here I am 

Looking for him on the Atlantic 

In a broken boat 

I would cross oceans for that guy 

And this bottle has done enough traveling 

So keep it close to you 

My boat is sinking 

And I never learnt how to swim 

But I fell deeply inlove 

So drowing deeply inlove 

Doesn't sound that much worse 


 

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I love the perspective of this piece. Drowning deeply in love is indeed not that much worse ;)

Thanks the comprising is quite similar

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