CONTAINMENT
I presented to the hospital,
For too long now I'd been ill.
The doors of glass they opened wide,
Sheepishly I stepped inside.
I told them I was not quite right,
Maybe I could spend the night.
I had been feeling sad and blue,
Perhaps someone could help me through.
I waited hours to see someone,
Then finally it seemed I won.
My name was called and I went in,
I know now that I did not win.
I answered questions honestly,
I wanted help so eagerly.
They locked me in there for three weeks,
Of what I saw I'll never speak.
Containment is not what we need,
The empty soul it does not feed.
My heart it longed for nourishment,
Not solitary confinement.
I gained no healing locked up tight,
They stole my dignity in the night.
Keep me safe til I am whole,
I left there like a wounded foal.
Safe from harming self and other,
My freedom forfeit for my brothers.
Original Poem and Sketch by @girlbeforemirror
Awesome.. Nice work...
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Cheers. Have you written yours yet? I'm looking forward to it. You underestimate yourself.
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Not yet sadly.. :(
I've seen the entries and they all are super awesome.. I guess I wont stand a chance against them.. But I'll write for fun.. I'm still working on it tho.. I'll write soon.. :)
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I don't anticipate winning either. Just enjoying being a little bit creative. x
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