Most Charitable Poetry #1- COMMITMENT

in poetsunited •  7 years ago 

This poem was recreated and inspired from VOWS. Thanks @poetsunited for creating this initiative.


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Seconds, minutes and hours spent with you
Are moments that I know those crushing eyes of some humans like me crave for
When I stare into your eyes
When I hold your hands

I see a future that I wish could come closer
Yes, there might be barricades
But I would not be swayed

Even when the sharpest words
Spoken by those tattling mouths try to cut us down
We will send our flood and they would drown out
Hahahahahaha….. How Much I Love US!

This connection that has electrified us through our hearts
Even distance couldn’t cause a disconnection
For pure is the love that has built between us
I wish they could see and understand

At night I watch your sleep while you smile
Butterflies rumble in my tummy
I do hope I’m in those dreams
That cause you to smile the way you do

Can I pause time?
For I long to be in with you very minute and watch you laugh every second
And be fully assured that those nights you sleep like a baby
Was created as a result of this love we share

If beauty could cause one to go dumb at the sight of it
Then I will be forever speechless at the very sight of you
And if rings were the keys to regain my speech
Then I would be holding one right now

Sometimes I can’t stand and watch them praise and worship your beauty
Well I try not to feel you are all mine yet
Even though I know it will definitely be a YES if I do ask

Then again I have to wait
How long do I have to wait?
Can we just teleport into the future?
For I really want to have those seconds, minutes, hours and days with you every day

....@mizdais....


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Lovely.

I can totally relate, having found the man who (mostly) gets me, and (absolutely) makes me treasure every moment spent with him. ;-)

Thank you @crescendoofpeace . Your comment was really appreciated.

You're welcome! I'll be checking out more of your posts when I get the chance. ;-)

Awwwwwww. Thank you. That will be so much appreciated.

My pleasure. Nice to make your acquaintance. ;-)