Ｕｎｓｅｅｎ Ｔｏｔａｌｉｔｙ
individual to itself-
Adapting and knowing of the breath.
Yet hushed conscience lies
the soul hidden,
until death.
Our eyes are seasoned to the dark,
when light is torn away,
Concealing its coloration
adjusts ones vision
to a distorted glow of the day.
And so much mournful darkness
-those conceptions to the brain,
where external empty vessel,
stores perfect harmony within.
Vast as our capacity.
Mysterious as our reality.
All Photos above are stock photos which have been edited in Photoshop
This poem has been written with the ''Mysteries of the Universe'' in mind as per poetry competition that @droucil is hosting.
Details of which can be found here.I hope you all enjoy it & a big massive Thank you to my followers , I have now reached over 600! Thank you SO much xxx 💜
Great words
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Thank you so much :) I am happy now!
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that was hard to be read :))
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oh, the text or the meaning of the words:)?
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the text :D
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Is it ok now?
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yes, it looks awesome now!
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Phew!!! The text didnt look so well on small screens!... Thanks for letting me know :)
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I fixed it now, I made some mistake with my text fonting
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Upvote! Nice post! Also, did you know that 21% of people don't make their bed in the morning :D
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Thank you so much :) No I didnt know that!!!.. are u writing an article about that?
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this is nice, thank you for sharing! :-)
up-voted
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Thanks for upvoting me , I hope your day is wonderful :)
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Legend.
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Is the soul Truly hidden til death? Lovely as Usual...:)
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I think so, I think its kind of.... sleeping :) until it is free to take on the universe :)
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Do you believe in the possibility of an out of body experience???
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I do!!! I think its a mixed bag, like everything. That some people use it as a good story but I do believe that its real too !
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I've had 2. Maybe it was all in my mind or a pure fantasy but I truly believe they were real. I believe when one has an obe they become one with what we call a soul. ok, sorry i got off topic lol Have a Great Morning...:)
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Thats very interesting, I would love for that to happen me, as I am sure life would be seen in such a different perspective afterwards! Things could never be the same again :)
Lucky to have 1!..., but two!
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Beautiful.
You inspire me to do some poetry myself :D
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now thats such a compliment!
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:)
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Let me know soons u do :)
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I looove this!
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awwww :) Thank You So MUCH :) I am glad that you found it interesting!
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Wow, it gets better and better
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Inspiring <3
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Aeeew Thank You Fellow Poet:)
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