Poetwisdom #1 - Lonely Evenings

in poetwisdom •  8 years ago 

Here is my entry to the first poetwisdom challenge. the desire to be accepted wholly by someone is certainly a mystery of the universe in my eyes, so it it what I wrote about.

Thanks for running the contest @droucil

Lonely Evenings

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Hollowness echoes through a deep pit

Scores of moments championed

Yet still a consistent residue of emptiness

An abundant treasure to be discovered

Unknown land to approach

Leap of faith spirits are embraced

For greatest wealth may be uncovered

Light found in a forever shade

Slowly glissading upon thee

Approaching a full eclipse

Submerged beauty will not fade

Immured affection thou has released

Discovered love cherished forever

The evenings forward filled with peace

Our lonely evenings have finally ceased


Regards,
Mitchell J
Thanks for the image pixabay

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Lovely cryptic poem, thanks for being the first entry :)!

Thank you, following you now. First entry, sweet! I'm sure I will have plenty of competition pouring in soon :-)

where is this contest??

Thanks!

This is really good.

Thanks!

Very well written! Upvoted and Followed!
We of @poetrytrail are always looking for quality content like yours! Hope you will hop on too and take part in our poetry and story writing events, it would be a shame if we couldn’t share this great writing with more of the community!

I like this. Loneliness is a great topic. Thanks for sharing!

Glad you enjoyed it! :-)

such a beautiful poem. so peaceful. I love the lines

An abundant treasure to be discovered
Unknown land to approach

wonderful.

Very beautiful interpretation of a lonely night... I love the smooth flow of your words! Resteemed ❤