Hello flamedarkmoon,
Regarding "I apologize if this piece seems incohesive and rather jumbled...."
I say don't worry. I think you got your points across well. I've written a bit myself and found that my content will suffer if I worry too much about good form, grammar, and so on.
I'll be looking for more of your work/opinions.
Thank you. I was a bit worried as I'm only used to writing essays and those require a very specific format meanwhile blogs/opinion pieces are up in the air rules wise.
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