I want my write to be come my music..%%

in portry •  7 years ago 

This is my write, i want planing the poetry can be s liryc my music..

The Curtain of Longing

Moon and stars are reluctant to shine at night,
The morning sun is not as perfume flower
Daytime thirst for sun exposure
Evening sorepun shame shone on the earth
When the longing approaches
No birds sing
Semerdu symphony

Tired footsteps
Following the strains of the harmony poem
Imagined the soul is slain
Welcomed the blushing body
When your face is present in the dream
Penetrating into hallucinations
Damaging the walls of emotion

Only a feeling can understand
Expect your presence on the side
Hugging her heart sadness
Crush longs at the edge
Together awaits beautiful sun
Drove to the melody
Until the dream is achieved immortal
Until death that ends...
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Why are u trying to write poems in english when you barely speak it?

Damn I'm digging your voice, very neo souly.