"CARNAL" Poema de mi autoria @alvarog

in provenezuela •  6 years ago 

Creo que este sentimiento no necesita mucha presentacion.
Espero lo disfruten y comenten.
Desde mi corazón un abrazo.

FUENTE DE LA IMAGEN

Quién te besara la
boca...
todo tu horizonte,
el centro!
Quién recorriera por dentro
todas tus habitaciones;
y en la mansión de tu cuerpo,
sólo elevara murmullos.
Quién allí hiciera poesía,
una estatua, un mural!
Que ilusión siento
al pensar en que si
yo fuera el dueño
de tus espacios pequeños
allí iría a morar
para elevarnos en vuelo
y comiendo de tus senos
y bebiendo de tu fuente
me sorprendiera la muerte.

FUENTE DE IMAGEN

Te invito a leer otros de mis trabajos gracias de antemano.

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      ·  6 years ago 

    Excelente poesia!! muy bien redactado y presentado tu trabajo, exitos!

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        ·  6 years ago 

      gracias amiga estaba indeciso de publicarlo ´por el tema asi que trate dr manipularlo con pinzas

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          ·  6 years ago 

        muy bella y romantica tu poesia,saludos

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            ·  6 years ago 

          Hola bella Mavel gracias por tu comentario a mi poema carnal hoy fue que lo vi disculpa!
          Una vez mas gracias por tu espacio de tiempo al leerme!
          Desde mi corazón y como siempre un abrazo!

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              ·  6 years ago 

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                ·  6 years ago 

              Muy sentido este poema.. Saludos

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                  ·  6 years ago 

                Gracias estuve unos dias distraido y no habia visto tu comentario muchas gracias por tu tiempo y comentarios a mi poema CARNAL!
                Desde mi corazón y como siempre un abrazo!

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