vejo seu traço dissipar
o vento, a areia, lágrimas não se acomodam
esvazio a mente ao te fitar
.
Uma espécie de nostalgia me assola
uma pressão intensa em meu estômago
saudade de terra que nunca vi me afoga
brotam lá do fundo de meu âmago
.
O entardecer traz enfim, instintos, medos e desejo
como seria viver na época das grandes embarcações?
Despeço-me do mar silencioso com um gracejo
esperando que siga tocando outros corações
.
Uma vez por ano vejo o mar, essa fronteira invisível do nosso lar
sempre que me recebe eu me transformo
uma vez mais sinto-me naufragar.
Aqui está minha participação no concurso do #lusofonia, espero que esteja dentro das normas (dificuldade em seguir normas). Agradeço a oportunidade. Qualquer problema mé da um toque que eu ajeito ;)
Belo poema Thomas, grato por compartilhar conosco!!! E boa sorte no concurso!!!
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Valeu @paulo.sar! =)
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Belíssimo trabalho, @thomashblum! Muito bom ver o esforço e o apoio em suas linhas escritas.
Obrigado pela participação! Abraços, querido amigo!
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Obrigado!! Vamos impulsionar o Lusofonia :)
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Muito bonita sua poesia, meu amigo @thomashblum!
Receba um abraço e meu apoio também!
Paz e bem! =)
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Valeu meu querido! Espero que bastante gente participe!
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Muito bonito @thomashblum. Parabéns pelo belo poema.
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Obrigado @ginga! =)
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Que belo poema @thomasblum! Boa sorte no concurso!
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Obrigado @cleateles!
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Lindo! Sinto-me embalada pela sua poesia, como pelo mar! Parabéns!
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Obrigado querida! =)
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Muito bem-vindo!!!
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Muito bom o poema amigo! Boa sorte no concurso!!
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Obrigado, amigo! :)
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