PUZZLE POETRY IS REALLY FUN!!!

in puzzlepoetry •  7 years ago 

Decided to try my hands on the Puzzle Poetry Challenge. Here is what I got myself.

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Left ColumnRight Column
I became lostin the woods
Hungry butcouldn't find appetite
My footprintsmissing in a long behind
Through all theseI still had not found
My originalkind
How perplexedI became when
I couldn't findSeeking
No reason to mindsuddenly
I beganto dream that
One daywe'll bind
Because I thoughtI had found
Somethinggood

Left Side poem

(Lost)

I became lost, hungry,
But my footprint
through all these,
My original

How perplexed i couldn't find
No reason to mind
I began one day
Because I thought something good


Right Side poem

(Found)

In the woods couldn't find appetite
Missing in a long behind, I still had not
Found kind!

I became, when seeking
Suddenly to dream that we'll bind,
I had found good!


Combined poem

(Lost-Found)

I became lost in the woods,
Hungry, but couldn't find appetite
..............
My footprints missing in a long behind
Through all these,
I still had not found my original kind

How perplexed I became,
When I couldn't find seeking
No reason to mind!

Suddenly I began to dream that
We'll bind because I thought
I had found something good!


Pls how is my little puzzle poetry??


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@aderonkemi
This is really creative.

I had to read it again and again.
Bravo!

Thank you very much for noticing the creativity.. I'm honored to have you here too

You're welcome.

seriously im gonna crazy when i dive in puzzle game i don't wanna quit ...😅

You tried it before?

yes many times we get this everyday on our newspaper 😅

Oh.. I never knew such existed in newspaper 😵😵

in our county Nepal we have in our daily newspaper

Thats really a nice one... I'm not sure we have that in Nigerian newspapers

At least, Punch has it.lol

Nice! Glad you had fun doing it, and I thought your piece was an interesting tale of paradoxes (lost/found) (hungry/no appetite.) 100% Upvoted since you were the only one to do it properly so far. Thanks @adernokemi! Have a great day.

Thank you so very much. I hope to participate in your subsequent contests. I am really learning a lot and I have an inkling, I would learn more from you. Have a nice time @d-pend and nice to meet you.

Yes, great, I'm happy a few people participated. It's nice to meet you to! Have a great day 😃 hopefully there will be another puzzle posted soon!

Woohoo!! I can't wait 💃💃

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