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burningzeal16 (55) in rap • 6 years ago (edited)

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago

Cool man

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago (edited)

Will tell my mom, what a big moment filled with pure joy. I'll hang it next to my other participation trophies thank you

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carlgnash (69) · 6 years ago

Woah dude these are intense lyrics! Holy crap you throw it down!

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago

Thanks you very much, I appreciate it

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago

Wow that's crazy

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organduo (72) · 6 years ago (edited)

It's so nice to see the lyrics of your piece written out here and being able to follow along when you perform in the video.

The way you write freely reminds me a little of the way I improvise on a pipe organ: I sit down and play something interesting until it'a time to end. No rules, just keeping it interesting while freely exploring various melodies, rhythms, harmonies, modes, dynamics, colors, textures and forms.

Please continue to create and share your art here...

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago

Wow, man your comment is crazy to me. I really dislike structure in general, guess that's a common trait in creative people. I will continue for sure, many cool songs coming. Also releasing a few mixtapes soon

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ronel (61) · 6 years ago (edited)

Oh man!
You nailed it! Rap, rap, rap!
Keep rapping man!
You'll hit it like this man!

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago

Love Mac Lethal. I can rap fast, but this is ridiculously fast lol. Thanks for the support, will keep posting dope raps

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ronel (61) · 6 years ago

Oh yeah!
I love raps but raps don't love me lol!
Keep rapping man!
By the way, what other hobbies do you do?

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago

Haha! Thanks, will continue. I'm a golf professional lol. So golf, racket sports, poetry, short stories, gym, etc

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ronel (61) · 6 years ago

You're a multi-talented man!
You're one of a kind!
Your bright future is waiting for you ahead.
You're destined for perfection!

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago

This means a lot to me thanks for the kind words:)

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ronel (61) · 6 years ago

You're very much welcome!
By the way how old are you, what's your name?

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago

I'm 27, my name is Christian

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tenpoundsterling (52) · 6 years ago

Rapping fast is like busting a nut before a girl climaxes, its totally irrelevant and it takes almost no skill. annunciating every syllable and making sure you get your point across takes absolute skill.

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago (edited)

Haha that metaphor is spot on. Rapping fast with good enunciation is the goal I agree

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macoolette (71) · 6 years ago

I am always amazed with how rappers do their craft. I can't even talk as fast as that. How much more with singing with such beat? 😂 Though I like the beat of raps. It makes me follow through and bang my head a little. It keeps the mood alive and awake.

Very good rapping there! Is this your composition?

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago (edited)

Thank you very much!! This is a contest hosted by termitemusic so not my beat, it is my lyrics though. I've been rapping for a decade plus:)

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macoolette (71) · 6 years ago

Oh I see. I did not know the mechanics of the contest. Do they give the beat and you come up with the lyrics to match it?

More than a decade of rapping would have really sharpened you with it. I would now know where to start if I were to join the contest. :D

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago

If you want to join here is the link https://steemit.com/@termitemusic
You can rap or sing or do anything creative on the beat. Round 52 wil start on Sunday.

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macoolette (71) · 6 years ago

Wow, that is cool! My mother and other housemates will be very surprise if one day, I go home rapping. Thanks for the link, though as much as I like music, music doesn't like me. I guess I'll remain in the audience seat admiring the performers. :)

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago

We all got to start somewhere, I was once a bad rapper too. All you need is passion:)

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macoolette (71) · 6 years ago

Passion! That's the thing. Let me find one, maybe... :D

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago

You can, just try many things:)

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janton (71) · 6 years ago

howdy from Texas sir burningzeal! yes sir your performance is burning zeal just like your username so you have the perfect username! Very intense and emotional performance and words man..wow.
And you know your words too like if I can ask you..what does "my brain’s coelvisac" mean?

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago (edited)

I appreciate the kind words sir. Ah man I love when people ask me about my lyrics, as vain as that sounds lol. "I rap CIRCLES aROUND you in my brain’s CULDESAC. You’re at a DEAD-END shit haven’t even started damn"
Should be culdesac, my mistake:) Basically wordplay with the CIRCLES and aROUND and then using CULDESAC to say rappers will die lyrically (dead end street) trying to challenge my mind in a battle.

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janton (71) · 6 years ago

haha! oh man burningzeal you certainly are almost violent in your passion, it's great! thanks for the explanation and I hope everything you do goes viral!

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago (edited)

Haha thanks! Violent lyrical mind, kind heart:)

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naideth (59) · 6 years ago

I speak Spanish and can not understand what you said but luckily you put the writing to be able to translate and understand it and OMG IS AN EXCELLENT LETTER .. !! He has a lot of power .. You have a very good voice for rap .. A hug from Venezuela @burningzeal16

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago

Hi Naideth, much love and thank you. Cool that you took the time to translate it. Peace:)

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tenpoundsterling (52) · 6 years ago

bro, this is so sick. awesome literature.

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago

I appreciate your kind words:)

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago

Thanks

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oliviackl (53) · 6 years ago

Thank you for the lyrics so that we can follow. This is not easy for a person to rap for around 3 minutes in one breath. Normal rap will go along with some music and singing. But yours purely rap and it really not easy.You are amazing where you can talk so fast with the beat. I am not a rap fan because most of the time, i didn't know what they rapped about because too fast for me to catch. Buy yours i can easily catch because of you have a clear voice together with the lyric. Good one and keep up your patience. Good luck in your contest.

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago

Thank you very much! I really focus very hard on pronouncing my words clearly as rap is all about lyrics. I've been rapping for a decade so guess hard work pays off:)

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neymarth10 (51) · 6 years ago

good rap @burninzeal16 friend you are a monster in the rap you have a lot of lyric I will try to make a lyric as well as yours every day you learn something new, you have a lot of talent brother still like that. @neymarth10

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago

I appreciate it Neymar! I like being called a monster lol:)

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fernando.lubezki (65) · 6 years ago

You have good flow man. And this dark style and as a machine-gun you look very good, I wish you much success, releasing fast bars is your thing.

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago

Thank you bro, much appreciated!

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yeninsfer (61) · 6 years ago

@burningzeal16 Excellent, you say every word one after the other in great style. I'm here at the same time watching your video and moving my hands and my head because it's contagious. Great talent friend. Imprecionante the passion and dedication you put to every letter you say. A lot of successes in music and in this contest you're taking part in. A big greeting.

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. Glad you found it contagious:)

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scribblingwilly (60) · 6 years ago

wow man! that part in the middle there blew my mind with those doubletime flows i was trying to read along at the same time and boom! my head exploded haha

nice work man!!

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago (edited)

Which head? Jokes lol! Thanks dude I'm gonna try and do a track on my mixtape where I do double time flows more than 50 percent of the track. So was practicing here so long lol

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scribblingwilly (60) · 6 years ago

haha the head on my shoulders man , that sounds dope id like to hear that shit! the practice defs payed off

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niallon11 (68) · 6 years ago

I've always been a fan of rap especially 90's gangster rap. I got a good sound from yours and it really reminded me of "immortal technique", if you've heard of him.

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago

Hi there, thank you. I like Immortal Technique. For interest sake did my vocabulary remind you of him, the sound of my voice or my flow? I love 90s gangsta rap too:)

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niallon11 (68) · 6 years ago

The vocabulary did to an extent as he always had a message in his work. Going into detail about the government and corporations. Gangland and people.

You definitely had some of that in the lyrics but mostly it was the voice. The way that you rapped and the sound behind it.

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago

Thanks for clarifying, yes I definitely had a message here:) That dance with the devil song is legendary

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niallon11 (68) · 6 years ago

It is legendary song but not for public playlists. I still listen to it once in a while just because. Such a tune.

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago

Yeah true, not a club song lol

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago

Thanks

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termitemusic (67) · 6 years ago

soz for late reply! This post totaly deserves the bigup it got!!!!!!! You smash this!!!!!!! sickest shit riight here!!!!! Nuff respect bruv!!

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burningzeal16 (55) · 6 years ago

Thx

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