[Rap] "The messenger" for @termitemusic's cypher #18

I'm a bit late this week but still really wanted to get this out. Check out the conclusion post @termitemusic just posted for the other entries. I might want to ad something to this and record it again but I'm not sure yet. Any constructive criticism is very welcomed!

The messenger

Lyrics:

I’ve got my golden shoes on
The presence of a president
A following of shepherds like the son of zeus
Don’t shoot the messenger, Apollos crew
Shooting for the moon with caduceus and snakes never follow rules

Electrifying moves like Pikachu
Choosing what they see peekaboo
In my defence to make them reach for truth
And get a sense of objects permanence like infants do
Instances of herd mentality, helps us disapprove

My intent is to maximize my divine intervention
I invented sacrifice to give incentive
Ask around, nothing takes you to the afterlife
Satisfied, except your massive appetite for lies

A wolf in cheap clothing, CEOs disguise
I’m mediocrely wise I still haven’t opened my eyes
I have stiletto knife advice, backstab never slice
And keep the cut down otherwise they plan a clever rise

A heist how time flies
You see it pass and then you might die
Forever in denial that you live for those you’re liked by
An endless cycle where the right buy
Gets defined by everyone around you at the right price, high fiving

Iron hands, not realizing that you can’t withstand
Advertising hiding everywhere without demand
Like a bad romance, you are right outside of my attention span
But still you’re choosing not to choose and turn on my command damn

I’ve convinced myself that you're to blame for being stupid
You’re only human after all, you’re just feeling music
I use it to get what I want like I’m dreaming lucid
Talk about taking shape when I’m speaking fluid

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Thank a lot if you listened and if you're not follow @termitemusic yet it's time! Dopest producer on Steem and he's already got a new cypher going! Peace!

Awesome flow as always. I was trying to do one of his cyphers but I didn't have time to.

Thanks a lot @alao really appreciated! Too bad you didn't find time but I know what you mean, I was a bit late with this one too. We already have the next one to try and catch haha.. Listening to your "One Eye" now, wow!

... always got a beat 'on the go' bruv!!!!!!!

Haha I hope you were dancing along!

YEEEAH!!! This is sick bruv!!!!!!!!!
"A wolf in cheap clothing, CEOs disguise
I’m mediocrely wise I still haven’t opened my eyes
I have stiletto knife advice, backstab never slice
And keep the cut down otherwise they plan a clever rise"
RRRRAAAHHHH! dope!!!!!!
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Woo thank you Termite! It's really interesting to see which bars stick out to you. You always hear it different after writing it etc.

Its true, you can never hear something completely fresh like a first time listener!! what was your favourite line in it u reckon??

Haha not sure on this one.. Probably the first four!

awesome opener!!! "A following of shepherds like the son of zeus" !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dude, you are really really good, I like the flow. Btw my cousin´s name is Dino :D
But only "flaw" I can notice is maybe that your vocals could be louder. Keep it up man

Thanks for checking it out! Haha tell him it's a good name :D And thanks I'll try to make the vocals a bit louder next time then.

Will do hahah! :D I wish you all the luck in the future with music, who is your favourite rapper? :)

Thanks again! I don't know always something new! @jamesgetsit here on Steem. A lot of Swedish ones.. You could look up Fliptrix if you want, from London I think, he's really dope in my opinion!