A Freestyle Battle. Pictures with Words. Battle Bard Busts loose, a dragons down for count? <3

in rap •  7 years ago 


So this happened again on discord with @Clayboyn, just a bit of fun during my morning in genchat on msp/palnet and getting hyped for the day with some truth bombs. This guy is on fire, watch him slay, (shame his target is a little elusive!!) but today the dragon was slain!! Enjoy and please give some feedback in the comments section! so much fun, omg reading it again is putting me right back there tonight as I ponder what I should submit to you. So I pushed The Button, I dropped The Hammer, and we took down a Ground Dragon with a priceless hoard of Truth, and did it with Love Today.

Pitter patter run your rampant words,
Ice shot through with veins of flow,
Shall we stay or how to know?
Step into the rapids, learn to go.

He thinks his scepter is royal.
My friend your stalk is limp.
Flowering head lowered.
Leaves shed like clothes.

He drops a trail of broken seeds.
Roots only cupping to support self.
We will excise this flawed growth.
Take green greed and place on shelf.

You knock chips off your block in stages.
Pay to win? this ain't progression mate.
Walking forward while stuck in reverse.
Close blind eyes, dance motionless with me.

You think sitting there stewing in your juices
Is the only way to marinade your stuff.
Get your baste on mate, copy paste your meat.
Drop it in the pan, bring the spam.

Paste present future?
Mate your words don't even exist to me.
I'm on another level.
You talk about enlightenment? I don't even have eyes.

This guy talks about might makes right.
Dropping bombs sparking(fright) up the night.
Shooting my rhymes through with light
He thinks fire burns when it just makes bright. (defy i could fit)

Blokes got flames? no just smoke
hidden behind mirrors coiled like snake
Crack out the pipe have another toke.
You are on it.

Keep throwing lefts while I go right.
This scrub keeps thinking darkness is light.
Driving in circles cycling way down.
LittlePoor clay needs to pick self off the ground.

Fuel tank leaking, wheels on lock.
Driver needs to release the cock.
Little man stuck racing himself.
All he needs is a touch of oneself.

Step out of the pit.
Take a bite of the peach.
You need sweetening dear.
In depths we run deep.
FALCON PUNCH

with a slaying like that
dragons lay down.
worlds go silent.
still your lips.


I put the words for my lead out at the bottom today, underneath my footer, because I feel like the words above are so powerful, that I want my image, my picture that I made for you that represents me, as close to this work as possible.

It's very powerful to me, but I took out every single 'response' to my verses, or my thrusts, in this internal and external mind match in order to remove my obligation to the value of @clayboyns input.

So yesterday I posted one of these, and I sent clay some sbd, how much is irrelevant, I valued his participation so I rewarded him.

How much do You? value.. Inspiration?

I sent him 15 SBD, I thought I didn't send enough... hahahahaha. I wish I could give it all away, but know that by doing this I remove a certain level of obligation from reward dispersal from the post, I just give what I think I valued that amount or how much I feel I took from that individual and they earned from me from the experience, and try to case by case it.

How much do you think I should send him today? :)

Interested

Maybe I should Cut it right in Two.

Much love, @Sammosk

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I love writing lyrics, so I tried rapping for about 4 days, on the Battle App.

I may write a post about it some day soon, but here was my biggest gripe about rap -

Why do I have to say negative things about others?
Can't we have an uplifting duel?
Why is there always a penis reference (conf. your stalk is limp)?

Love and Light!

It was man vs man at that point, like part of the ego. And I was trying to attack the masculinity to break it down.

I dunno I was just feeling out the room, I guess I had a hand on It? Hahahaha

I feel the power of rap too, incredible lyrics with the power of spoken word - it can be intoxicating. I particularly love fantasy imagery, like slaying dragons.

These are just some thoughts about....maybe tendencies?

You motivated me, I did a rap call-out this morning.

https://steemit.com/callout/@ecoinstant/ecoinstant-calls-out-papa-pepper

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FALCON KICK!

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This is very deep,waoh

wow dude cool