Steemit Rap Challenge #23 Entry - @bryandivisions Off the Top Freestyle Over @teachtek's 'HipHop4EVA'

What's good Steemit!

This verse was an off the top freestyle inspired by this amazing beat produced by @teachtek aka Analog! I love it when I hear a beat that makes me want to go truly off the top!

It brought me back to some old feelings and was an awesome opportunity to let them out and express them.

This verse really represents feelings of mine when I didn't see much hope in the world, but truly wanted it to change. Not only am I speaking of the external world, but my internal world as well. These were feelings of being stuck, but desperately wanting to break free of personal judgment, insecurity, and self criticism.

Much love and I appreciate being able to share with you all! Check out the lyrics below!

Lyrics
'Yo I can feel it, every single day as I just pull back and reveal it,
who I am, deep inside of the mask and the soul,
yeah because I know that I just truly can,

find the source of my spirit,
I just gotta look beyond the physical and find the etheric
and I know that I hear it, somewhere calling,
I just been lookin yeah my past I been fallen,

I've been crawling, deep beneath the floorboards
yeah I want it more open up my wings then I soar,
but through the mountain tops where I want to truly go
but I don't even know yeah my body's so cold,

so froze, deep beneath, yeah I can't even feel,
everything around me is freezing, I just wanna peel,
back all the layers, all of these things that are coming around me,
I just want to speak out and sing,

my whole truth to this world around me,
but I'm just feeling like all just try to down me,
try to clown me, but that just happened that way,
I'm feeling like I just smile anyway yeah,

rap challenge 23, ay!'

Thanks @rondonson for hosting!!

Thanks for watching!

Much love,
Bryan Divisions

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so dope
def chekcout #littledickey!
thx for the post @bryandivisions

Have you seen his Tim Westwood freestyle? It's soooo good! Thanks @kellycomatose!

I think so but maby shoot me a link just in case.
I’m guessing you have also seen the animation music video he did with snoop right?
so amazing !

Great words man you hable the flow mannn :D :D.

Thanks bro! And I'm learning more and more Spanish, pero es muyyyy pequito :)

" Gracias hermano. Y yo estoy aprendiendo mas y mas Español, pero es muy poquito :) 👍😁.

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excellent brother very good lyrics, you surprise me again with your thoughts expressed in lyrics and songs, because I know that they are pure words that come from your heart, I congratulate you.

Can you write in spanish?. Could you try :D.

This is dope, I didn't know when I listened it was a freestyle!! That is amazing job man.