RE: 🎤 STEEMIT RAP CHALLENGE WEEK #8 SUBMISSION THREAD - GET YOUR REAL ANALYSIS ON SUNDAY 🎧

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🎤 STEEMIT RAP CHALLENGE WEEK #8 SUBMISSION THREAD - GET YOUR REAL ANALYSIS ON SUNDAY 🎧

in rapchallenge •  7 years ago 

Lyrics:
I'd be lying if I said I didn't fear the future,
caught up in a stupor, will my death be a looter,
tumor, side show cougar, back alley shooter,
time traveling looper, a bomb sent via computer,
misled kid got tired of being a called a loser,
we all monsters in our way,
if you so religious stop acting like judgement your holds weight,
Fuck your money it's time that you should donate,
this to the playboys and playmates,
your treat life like a dream or make it that way,
but you cross them white lines, bleed the night away, everything in moderation always leaves a hunger pain,
pop more champagne, just to drown in the rain,
insane in the cellophane, profane with a hellish game,
we all one in the same,
you ain't some special snowflake,
scream for that red faced hate, televise a rant,
try and take the rights away,
best know I would die for my namesake,
"Boy stop fooling yourself", if you think you in my lane,
"Boy stop fooling yourself", think you fuckin with hive gang,
"Boy stop fooling yourself", we decipher the arcane,
"Boy stop fooling yourself", we’ll drop you like wolfs bane

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Hella nice bro!

thanks dude!

hell yea

This was raw as fuck on some real life spit.

This right here! dope entry man. decipher the arcane!

this is a dope entry bro!!

thanks man

everything in moderation always leaves a hunger pain
ouch man, that's good

I liked that line too

appreciate it guys

sick bro sick... That flow you have is epic.

Thank you dude!

Yea that was heat dude 🔥🔥 🔥

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

good look alao, thanks for contributing to the pool

Hey man just trying to give back to all of the contestants. I also randowhaled everyone on the contestants on thier personal blog if they posted it. So really if you submitted this week you got something.

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

You just gently walked over that beat with the flow, yet all barred up. Dope one bro!

thanks mayne!

Digging the lyrics. pretty hard. if you so religious stop acting like judgement your holds weight,
Fuck your money it's time that you should donate

yeah man too many people give to charity and too few actually help someone in need hand to hand

So many bars in this entry of yours bro, you came with the wisdom and deep profound contemplations that resonate with my soul. Truth infused bars

"I'd be lying if I said I didn't fear the future,
caught up in a stupor, will my death be a looter,
tumor, side show cougar, back alley shooter,
time traveling looper, a bomb sent via computer,
misled kid got tired of being a called a loser,
we all monsters in our way,
if you so religious stop acting like judgement your holds weight,
Fuck your money it's time that you should donate,
"

A lot of quotable up in here

"everything in moderation always leaves a hunger pain,
pop more champagne, just to drown in the rain,
insane in the cellophane, profane with a hellish game,
we all one in the same,
"

Great entry bro

thanks bro!

You're very welcome bro :)