🎧 STEEMIT RAP CHALLENGE WEEK #6 SUBMISSION THREAD! 🎤

palisade (43) · 7 years ago

I fuck with this line for sure "People think that I’m playing, Story flow entertainment
But I can’t deny engagement, the spiritual world’s adjacent" your writing continues to improve, good job homie

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

Thank you for peeping the penmanship bro, much respect and gratitude.

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yakuhi (56) · 7 years ago (edited)

Solid Entry as usual, lotta balls using an Eminem beat xD

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

Thank you man, I wasn't feeling any of the other beats, and I knew Eminem's beat required extra effort and performance. It was a solid challenge

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enginewitty (72) · 7 years ago

It's tight D, hard to beat man.

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

I'm truly only aiming to be better than myself, I know my flaws, thank you bro, appreciate your valued feedback

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enginewitty (72) · 7 years ago

I feel ya, I'm my worst critic too. Or best critic? Not sure how that should go lol

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

Worst and best, it goes hand in hand bro, I feel the same way about myself!

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benja (60) · 7 years ago (edited)

Ahh storytelling, always love such verses. Big up bro!

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

Thank you very much bro, gotta share my story and get it off my chest

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awarenessraiser (59) · 7 years ago

@verbal-d Ayyeeeee you spit it yo!!!

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

Thank you very much my friend, I appreciate you listening, did you get a chance to peep the Queen Official track? You gotta hear it! That pertains to all queens.

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alao (64) · 7 years ago

My week 6 submission thanks @rondonson and the judges. Your keeping me on my toes.

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10 votes

rondonson (66) · 7 years ago

you went in my dude!

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freshstuff (57) · 7 years ago

so great flow , respect G :)

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yakuhi (56) · 7 years ago

Hardcore shit!!! Love your flow man, pretty Jay-z like indeed.

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kaykunoichi (62) · 7 years ago

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enginewitty (72) · 7 years ago

your flow smooth as silk man

benja (60) · 7 years ago

Sickkk, Kinda got a slight Jay-Z feel there haha, dope man!

awarenessraiser (59) · 7 years ago

@alao Ayeeeee you smashed it!

speaktheunspoken (54) · 7 years ago

Dope bars yo!!!

mickeymic (46) · 7 years ago

Here's Me. Enjoy. feedback would be appreciated. good luck yoll

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4 votes

verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

Real cool vibe and fresh rhythmic style flow bro
"I'm the numba one spitta in the jungle fam!"

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yakuhi (56) · 7 years ago

Nice flow. Digs.

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casvnova (43) · 7 years ago

Lyrics

Im a Houston kid probably off hallucinogens
Scumbag degenerate likely cause of all my friends
tie the noose record my end
In heaven with a fucking benz
Raping every fucking beat i guess this is a sinny sin

Nigga you making dough ?
no homie no you aint eatin
my niggas they making bread
yo oven aint even heated
to stay up in this game you gotta have a reason
or we put a bullet in ya head and give you something to believe in
they come to yo aid like magic but hopefully it aint magic
that shit would be tragic like no bodies in the casket
we killing boys adolf
pull up to your crib cause we caught you on the radar
pull up with the mask off spray you with the AR
we some fucking killers and we never take a day off
shooting like the playoffs i guess the gym done paid off
had to be the boss the cause the company made some layoffs

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2 votes

enginewitty (72) · 7 years ago (edited)

had to be the boss cause the company made some layoffs...feel that man

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago (edited)

You had fun with this one I see, and this line of yours is truth, if there's no known purpose or intention, keep it moving
"to stay up in this game you gotta have a reason"

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casvnova (43) · 7 years ago

thanks bro!

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

You're very welcome!

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https://steemit.com/rapchallenge/@eddiebxxxx/eddie-bxxxx-rapchallenge-week-6

eddiebxxxx (45) · 7 years ago

-We all know sheep need a shepherd, thats natural/
-But I’m a goat that won’t tolerate the beef wit cattle/
-We were never banished from the kingdom, we ski-daddled/
Left the garden of Eden before we could even eat the apple/
-Fuck bein b-lessed, i b/
More wit that intellect, thats why the stress is more complex/
-Thats why i never spit that lame brain nonsense/
-Talk is cheap, i treat knowledge like dollars/
-I don’t rap to entertain, i rap/
To enter yer brain, overload circuits, blow the mainframe/
You lovin it, I need a beat like a tranny/
Needs a changed name, my rap name, same name, government/
-The man, the legend, so fuck who, what/
Where you reppin, the scared don’t question, so question/
Do you play stupid games just to win stupid prizes?/
-Its a damn shame ya third eye’s been crystallizin/
Breadcrumb stale while I’m innovative and redefinin/
-I keep the peace while you keep the silence/

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7 votes

rondonson (66) · 7 years ago

"Its a damn shame ya third eye’s been crystallizin" heaviest bar of the challenge this week

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enginewitty (72) · 7 years ago

It's a damn shame your third eye's been crystallizin
strick man

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago (edited)

Vicious gritty approach as always bro, heavy entry
"i b/
More wit that intellect, thats why the stress is more complex/
-Thats why i never spit that lame brain nonsense/
-Talk is cheap, i treat knowledge like dollars/
-I don’t rap to entertain, i rap/
To enter yer brain, overload circuits, blow the mainframe/"

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eddiebxxxx (45) · 7 years ago

Thanks bro, and i always enjoy your bars of reality.

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

Appreciate that, you're welcome, I know we have different perspectives and beliefs, but we can definitely acknowledge the skill, the pen and other aspects of flow, delivery and presence factors of Hip Hop. Your entries are impacting

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chiefmappster (63) · 7 years ago

Man you never cease to amaze me. I look forward to judging your submissions every week buddy, always epic

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eddiebxxxx (45) · 7 years ago

Thanks Chief.

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chiefmappster (63) · 7 years ago

you're welcome buddy. just that real shit

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michaeldavid (65) · 7 years ago

Tight bro!

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benja (60) · 7 years ago

''Its a damn shame ya third eye’s been crystallizin'', oehlala, I like that one, sick entry man!

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opinizeunltd (57) · 7 years ago (edited)

Heres my submission SteemIt family...lyrics below

https://steemit.com/rapchallenge/@opinizeunltd/steemit-rap-challenge-week-6-submission
I freestyle or writer, lover or fighter
who flyer
chew on a shroom or light up the fire
who higher
my aura shine brighter im a highlighter
i dont walk i hang glide im a skydiver
young macguyver dont need a gun to stunt on negus
& i show way too much love to ever front on negus
beautiful mind so i love to play dumb on negus
an enigma myself cant worry about no one else
shout out to rondonson this contest inspiring
Steem made me put my jersey back on come out of retirement
know im coming out firing
so even if im missing a couple of em gon hit ya
a 1 man army i brought my solo militia
with 1 distinct order kill u and everyone with ya
mister got em on the tip of my stick
and how i serve em in the booth they should leave me a tip

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3 votes

awarenessraiser (59) · 7 years ago

Ayyeeeee you had me wantin to smoke a bleezy to this!! :D @opinizeunltd

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opinizeunltd (57) · 7 years ago

Fire that shit up lol

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hashbrown (50) · 7 years ago

eyyy fam "i don't walk i hang glide i'm a skydiver" yeee!

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opinizeunltd (57) · 7 years ago

preciate it homie

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rondonson (66) · 7 years ago

you nice my g! this shit fire bro....but yo..you pronounce my name Ron Donson lol. two separate names...but you killed this!! Salute homie

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steamint (25) · 7 years ago (edited)

First post on steemit, me rapping while delivering pizzas. hope you like :)

Lyrics
zero’s got no rep and one minute set it,
by the way i hate to waste space with a whack sentence,
rap fetish, how am i this fly but this underground,
I'm just turning up the sound,
it was stuck on zero, now i keep it hundred,
keep it bumping, till the sun is up in, the dungeon,
what the fuck is this, fishing in a barrel filled with fifty fish,
with a barrel fifty cal and a packet of ritz,
they go crackers for this, rappers shitting brick,
like a drug mule during and after a shift,
it’s too late i’m too two face, Trying to paint over a dent when I rap,
a rush like a drug when the pen hits the pad,
when i hold the mic, you’ll feel like you saw a poltergeist,
I'll deliver my last pizza like Walter white, on the roof, cold as ice,

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2 votes

enginewitty (72) · 7 years ago

Welcome to Steemit man! Good place to start, got a community of like minded over here.

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burningzeal (40) · 7 years ago (edited)

Anyone who has experienced depression will relate to this -Burning Zeal-

Lyrics:
RIP to Chester Bennington, so depressed and negative
The most positive mental states senses it
Till they need antidepressants, to function in my presence
They say I’m the deadliest depressant
Waking up in the middle of the night in a cold sweat
That feeling like the world’s gonna end
Barely energy left to be technical
Sorry rhyme schemes, remind me of depression
Too complex sometimes and don’t make sense at all
Ejecting this message off my chest like a cockroach
Releasing eggs, seconds before they’re dead
Could never start to live, before my birth descended in the depths at the end of death
Tried Dettol for the scars, STORY is healing's a TALE
Like cutting off a lizard’s, pain just regenerates
Penetrates so deep, your soul levitates to escape
The start of anesthetics yay no pain!
But no pain paradoxically hurts the most
The numbness has some feelings like a paraplegic
Prosthetic feet is stepped on "medic!" hie hie

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2 votes

enginewitty (72) · 7 years ago

Good flow man, trump

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burningzeal (40) · 7 years ago

Thank you

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chiefmappster (63) · 7 years ago

o weeeee killed it

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burningzeal (40) · 7 years ago

Thanks bro

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chiefmappster (63) · 7 years ago

absolutely buddy keep doing great things

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