RE: 50 word story: Week #14 contest "Michael's Misfortune"

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50 word story: Week #14 contest "Michael's Misfortune"

in redfish •  7 years ago 

This story felt like a representative sliver of a much larger story. Way to say a lot with less! You introduced a lot of intriguing elements without overly stating them. Great work.

Read and graded. Best of luck!

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Thanks, that's kind of what i was going for :)

Haha that's great then. You effectively conveyed it :D