50 word story: Week #14 contest "Michael's Misfortune"

in redfish •  7 years ago  (edited)

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He asked himself how it had come to this. The pale light of a full moon, reflecting the blood on his trembling hands, and the knife he had used to defend himself. Standing tall over the man who'd attempted to kill him, Michael knew, he would never sleep soundly again.

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very nice! keep sharing your writing, in contests or otherwise :-D

This story felt like a representative sliver of a much larger story. Way to say a lot with less! You introduced a lot of intriguing elements without overly stating them. Great work.

Read and graded. Best of luck!

Thanks, that's kind of what i was going for :)

Haha that's great then. You effectively conveyed it :D

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