The review for a story "Hope" by @princessmewmew from @mgaft1

in review •  7 years ago 

The review for a story "Hope" by @princessmewmew

I can probably express the points of this story in one phrase: “Hope is not measured by materialistic things – it’s a feeling that lives inside us or not.” In itself, this is not a very original statement and is popular philosophical stand and an established liberal view. One can perhaps argue and counter this view. Yet arguing con or pro is not a purpose of a review.

It is much more interesting to me how the author brought forward this point and utilizing an interesting compositional construct, which, for the lack of the better term, I would call mirroring.

The story starts from POV of a rich girl, who arrives at her Mercedes and meets a poor bum girl, who asks for or 5-dollar bill. The rich girl feels very companionate toward the bum girl. She gives her the money and pays attention to the expression in her eyes, the expression of hopelessness.
Then the story switches to the POV of a bum girl, briefly familiarizes the users with her circumstances and reenters the same scene as before. The scene from the rich girl and the bum girl meet, only now the author presented the same scene through the bum girl’s eyes.

Now the bum girl notices that the rich girl also has a hopeless expression in her eyes. The cause of her unhappiness is quite different, but the end result is the same.
Thus, in a way, the author as if putting the mirror between the two women, the mirror that reflects the same expression of hopelessness, generated by the entirely different circumstances. An interesting and unusual plot device. Kudos to the author.

Respectfully, @mgaft1.

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Hi! Wow, I am very flattered by your review. May I ask how you found it?

Thank you 💓

It’s interesting as I think you understand it better than I did, this tells me that I explained better than I thought I did.

Thank you!

Well, this is a literary review channel. If you will look through our posts, all of them are reviews of stories movies, and books. I found your story browsing through fiction tag. I sensed something unusual about it and decided to spend the time and think about it more in depth. :)

amazing! thank you, I will definitely check out your posts

i enjoyed your analysis

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