Dreams

in rishiays30 •  7 years ago 

Wait and watch...1st off all...after breaking your dreams, u may get depressed..but.. determine your way..finding the new hope..make your a ray of new hopes, new dreams and set up all necessary steps and requirements to achieve that...one day it will be yours like sun risereceived_1629339033964946.jpeg

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You have a minor grammatical mistake in the following sentence:

make your a ray of new hopes, new dreams and set up all necessary steps and requirements to achieve that.
It should be you're a instead of your a.

Yaa..my mistake..I think if I erase a then also it will be correct