Oh, this is a sort of application for a contest? I only realized at the end. Good thing you put in the "contest" tag :) I love everything you write, I follow you now (sooo creepy, haha) and will participate in your writing contest. I came here to wrote (and also make reading fun and interactive) and got derailed somehow... Hope you get delegated some steem, it is very much needed to get more. And I will also come around and give you constructive feedback :) (using the sandwich technique ;)