POEMA: SIGO ESPERANDO POR TI

in sabadopoetico •  7 years ago 

POEMA: SIGO ESPERANDO POR TI

Tristemente mi soledad,
prospera como la niebla,
colmando esta ansiedad,
tortura y musa tiembla.

Ella se fue de mi lado,
un amargo día de otoño,
corazón desenfrenado,
se quiere soltar el moño.

¿Si regresará algún día?
¡Pregunto ilusionado!
Muero solo en letanía,
por ti voy enamorado.

Físicamente se borra,
ya no encuentro su cuerpo,
ni su corazón de marra,
alma errante disipo.

Tener fe o esperanza.
esperar tiernas caricias,
fantasma que sutil lanza,
flechas de hielo y ansias.

¿Resistiré a la nada?
¡Tiembla duda en mi mente!
corre frio en mi espalda,
de saber lo aparente.

¿Imagino con otro está?
¡Seguro en la distancia!
Si prefiero tu venida,
o soñar por tu ausencia.

Corriendo castizo riesgo,
¡herida llora mi alma!
Mejor no venga, yo muero,
su desprecio, me desarma.

Turbias locuras indignan,
perdona, temores y charlas,
¿por qué amores emigran?,
Triste paloma sin alas.

Sigo esperando por ti,
con mi palenque de preso,
morir por este frenesí,
añorando tu regreso.

ESTE POEMA ES 100% DE MI AUTORÍA

Fuente de las Imágenes: https://giphy.com

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Muy bonito poema

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Gracias por tu comentario Leivis.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Hola muy bueno su poema,saludos desde anzoategui Venezuela.Espero contar con tu apoyo y pases por mi blog
    https://steemit.com/cervantes/@amirjv1/familiar-enfermo

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      ·  7 years ago 

    As a follower of @followforupvotes this post has been randomly selected and upvoted! Enjoy your upvote and have a great day!

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      ·  7 years ago 

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Si está muy lindo tu poema.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    y así es, uno se fosiliza en la triste espera, buen escrito

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Es muy triste cuando se espera por alguien sin esperanzas de su regreso.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    asi estamos, esperando! Saludos...

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Y aqui seguimos esperando. Saludos hermano.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    ¡Excelente poema @josevasquez, me ha encado lo inspirador de tu arte! Es increíble como has logrado plasmar la añoranza y las ansias en el anhelo que debe conformarse con sólo un espacio vacío. Cuanta agonía en la espera incierta, cuanta pasión frustrada por amores que terminan sin aviso. ¡Excelente arte ! Me encantaría conocer tu opinión de alguno de mis poemas, siempre me encanta compartir opiniones con otros artistas, saludos.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Muchas Gracias por tu buen comentario, cargado de poesía, amigo.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    saludos amigo Jose. Poema lleno de sentimiento. te invito a pasearte por mi pagina en ella encontraras mis poemas publicados. espero sean de tu agrado. feliz dia.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Con mucho sentimiento este poema, fue de mi agrado. Me llamó la atención esta parte:

    "¿Imagino con otro está?
    ¡Seguro en la distancia!
    Si prefiero tu venida,
    o soñar por tu ausencia"

    Llama mi atención por que la ansiedad es tal que se prefiere seguir en el limbo de no saber si está o no con alguien, se prefiere seguir imaginando con agonía.

    Que bien además saber que eres Venezolano, saludos!

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      ·  7 years ago 

    lindo poema <3 saludos desde Maracay!! te sigo amigo

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Que triste pero hermoso poema, saludos desde Sucre.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    This wonderful post has received a @josevasquez 19.92% upvote from @hellowhale. Discord Channel: https://discord.gg/XG4y3mg You can vote in the name of the odl. https://steemit.com/~witnesses

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        ·  7 years ago 

      You got a 13.39% upvote from @mercurybot courtesy of @josevasquez!

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          ·  7 years ago 

        muy buen poema mano!!

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Muchas gracias. Bienvenido a Steemit.

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            ·  7 years ago 

          un poema muy bien escrito... es un gusto leerte

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