Stunned by the sound
Hurled into my life
Shocked by my own sickness
Shocked by my own lack of control
How
Do
I
Fix
What
Is
So
Broken
How
Do
I
Call
Upon
The
Goodness
To
Attract
The
Measure
Of
Wealth
Needed
To
Accomplish
These
Unavoidable
Tasks
These
Unavoidable
Masks
No
Riddle
Is
Without
Solution
Heart
Pollution
Resolution
Healing
Wealth
Stealing
Health
Feeling
Wealth
Giving
Health
How
Darkness
Stares
Blankly
Many
Zeros
Frankly
The
Wrong
Side
Of
The
Decimal
It’s dismal unless
Somehow good deeds manifest
In the form of a miracle
A true treasure chest
Something
Binding
Me
To
A
New
Rock
Bottom
Unfathomably
hey dear @lorilikes
w
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l
l
d
o
n
e
People who give more to others in terms of time and resources both experience greater satisfaction in life.
I’m definitely going to be look forward to more posts from you.
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Thank you @robert31 I appreciate those words very much! ✨⭐️✨
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I feel shame find mu again. I don't know what should I say in every I come across you.
However, my curiosity is greater than the feeling of shame. And you are missed that much like rain drenching my heart
Miss you @lorilikes
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For some stanzas
How Do I Fix What Is So Broken... you #don't fix what is broken you can fix how you look at it.
These Unavoidable Tasks... #sleep you can stepover the Unavoidable.
These Unavoidable Masks... #fake is the new real
How Darkness Stares Blankly... #light up the candle.
Healing Wealth Stealing Health Feeling Wealth Giving Health... Man that's really #tough
Something Binding Me To A New Rock Bottom Unfathomably... #break the chain and fly like a bird
@lorilikes 😅
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Great reply! Thanks very much for your optimism! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Very good poetry about life,
How do we find solutions when we are being squeezed by the bitterness of life,
The most important thing is how we can find a solution so that we can reach the safe point of a problem that we live,
Life.
Sometimes what we expect does not match reality,
But we hurus sure
God will give way to @lorilikes
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This is a discussion deep feeling of your poem frankly we can feel that you express about sad and loose. Seem you want to cry for. It is a difficult decession to take. That is all.
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@rikaz87 are you saying this is 1 person?
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I was dry, leaves falling in the dry on the road
People walk with eyes closed, ears covered
Staying quiet but I own you give a smile for everyone. And I'm waiting for your smile many years in the rest of my life.
To @lorilkes
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ho si wira, jok pulang ladom. droe neuh na roh cok, sayang teuh ka gasin jih..
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@rikah87 please translate your comments
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He said, "Hello, I heard there's a site where if you post random anythings on it that people will give you loads of free monies. The more scammy posts that you make, the more monies you're supposed to get. Therefore, here's one of mine so that you can give me all the money. Off to make more
$moneycomments!"Does that help? :)
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🤭😝
Some part of me (the narcissist part) wants this to be untrue. At the end of the day sometimes I suspect that all my “fans” are the same group of Hungry boys from Indonesia. It’s hard to tell. Let them eat. 🍪🥧🍱
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Sugar attracts ants. Sometimes you ask if thats what the world is all about. One day some people came looking for Jesus Christ just because he fed them the previous day. Same old world. No changing.
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We all want people to like us for who we are, not just what we can give them. It can be harder to tell on Steemit, but some people are easier to read than others.
Shoot, if I had known that cookies and treats were getting handed out, I would have moved to Indonesia. Ha ha
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Are you saying they actually all aren’t madly in love with me? ❤️
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Oooops, I wasn't supposed to tell you that. They're totally in love with you. And Santa Claus is real. So is the Easter bunny!
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This have been tranlated in another post of comments. Thank you friends.
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Good deeds begat good deeds. Indeed miracles are possible. Happens every second. Life is miracle itself. Many come and go. Here we are, the miraclous. Only one man can fix brokeness pretty better. His name is JESUS CHRIST the only begotten son of the Almighty GOD. Behold Him.
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I'm with you there. For the last while I've been without much control. Today I got more bad news. It's a fight to stay above water sometimes, but the breakthrough is coming. We just have to keep fighting for it.
Love what you did with the styling of this poem. It's a heavy topic, but I can still see the determination and positivity through it.
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Thanks very much for seeing me. 🦋
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treasure and glory are only temporary, all will disappear with death. never regret with this life, enjoy, live and all will be happy in the end. poems that really touch the heart @lorilikes that tells of our life in the world and what we will bring to heaven.
Thanks you so much @lorilikes
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Ugh...dude...This one breaks my heart. So sorry I'm unable to help. :(
I so wish I had the answers for you.
Beautiful writing though....cuts right to the core of it.
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✨❤️✨
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If you ever find out how to
"Call
Upon
The
Goodness
To
Attract
The
Measure
Of
Wealth
Needed
To
Accomplish"
then tell me please :D I would like to contact her too :)
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@lorilikes There is a common desire
Looking for treasure as much as mana
Period of empowerment.
When the sun shines on the earth
We also rise from the dream
Reconnecting search
That stalled last night.
Satisfaction radiated clear
When the dream is proven
With wealth owned
Still no longer sufficient,
It is so human attitude
Not satisfied with the existing
As treasure in the world
Can take it there.
We forget the treasure that is brought only
The day's deeds are for sure.
It's too late when the body is stretched out
Not working, that's when
Visible all where
Our place.
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This is an awesome post dear @lorilikes
I value your post..actually you are extraordinary one in this steemit.. keep your endeavors like this u are constantly great execution throughout everyday life.
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Nothing is impossible,
all can happen.
even though the eyes are blind,
but the heart is still glowing.
because the heart is the extension of life.
we give back to the heart.
nice poetry @lorilikes
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ho si wira, jok pulang ladom. droe neuh na roh cok, sayang teuh ka gasin jih..
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Translation please ?
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Thanks very much!❤️
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This is a great post dear @lorilikes
I appreciate your post..actually you are great one in this steemit.. keep your efforts like this u are always good performance in life.
I am always follow your post..
Cause I like your post always..
And your every post is mind blowing ..
god bless you.
upvoted and resteem
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hi my friend @lorilike. deepest in my heart I really want to care. Are you okay my friend? hope you are not in so sad. even though your words telling me bad. I believe that you are strong to face rock bottom of the sea, and the humble heart will not feel the pain, and you know what you want to gain.
if the code is true, mean is nothing to do. if a wait is being a choose, let the time cure your pain, fresh your mind to cure your health, and keep the spirit gathering back your wealth.
keep happy my friend.
hopefully it is a misunderstand of me.
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You understood, I am weak and still strong at the same time. ✨
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Good morning @lorilike. It a good news to start my new day. Thank you.
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About the comment in foreign language, I pledge you to translated later. Now i am in my traveling way. Commontly we talked about the meaning of your poem. Thanks. Sorry for impolite deed.
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No
Riddle
Is
Without
Solution
This phase really tells current scenario where people just loose their hope very soon they don't understand that if there is a problem then you also have solution for that ...... I have a live example a friend of mine commited suicide just because he got drop in engineering@lorilikes do you think life is so small ..... There was surely a better solution for this problem but he chossed the wrong one according to me
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Brother I agree about your fact completely but along with her fact the other fact is --you are a Chu guy.. tmkc BC .. but I am loving this post alot @sid9999
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Sorry to hear about your friend, he chose wrong I think.
I wish we could turn time backwards.
*Hugs
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the poem you read is a heart story.
stories that can inspire us all.
You make a story that
generate 1001 answers.
this is so amazing @lori.
I am amazed at the charm of the story line in your poetic vocabulary.
short, but full of profound meaning.
I can not answer your poetry dear.
this is amazing.
I will always learn to write poetry and poetry.
hopefully you will like to view my writing.
although not as beautiful as your writing.
best wishes @lorilikes
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Very good poetry about life,
How do we find solutions when we are being squeezed by the bitterness of life,
The most important thing is how we can find a solution so that we can reach the safe point of a problem that we live,
Life.
Sometimes what we expect does not match reality,
But we hurus sure
God will give way to @lorilikes
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it's amazing @lorilikes. . . . . . How these words come to your mind?
this one is Just WOww
Healing
Wealth
Stealing
Health
Feeling
Wealth
Giving
Health
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Well your poem seems to be consist
of perfect concoction of word,just like pearls sew to the thread to form a beautiful necklace.
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Finding happiness is actually not difficult, because happiness comes from ourselves. If our mind is always positive, happiness will come easily. Conversely, when thinking of negative things, it will only hinder and make our life full of pressure.
The bad thing that happened yesterday, leave it and do not let that experience bother you. Sign in and create new experiences for your life. Strengthen the determination, passion and inspiration of your life with this collection of wise words of life.
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Wow! Great piece, breath-taking poetry. You are good! Life is a mountain and a valley, varieties of all sorts and I wonder how we ever put up with it.
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Hello @lorilikes, i am sorri for aware of you. Are you in sadness? Your words tell me that you are in conflict between mind and soul. Hope you always fine lorilikes.
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@lorilikes a biggest conspiracy can be solved if you can ans about the question of joining things which is so broken.... A very deep concept but a very important question to be answered
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What shall I do to achieve this ?
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This life will feel beautiful What else is surrounded by people who love us, and every human being has the right to have what he wants even though not in accordance with what is expected, never demand the right if no sense of responsibility.
Your poem @lorilikes really touches the heart and teaches me the meaning of world life in heaven.
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You are an amazing writer. I am highly impressed by your writing skills.
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Thank you, keep coming to visit my work. :)
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Very good poetry mom @lorilikes
Words that make everyone think more clearly with reality,
Each post poem always attracts the hearts of its readers,
I'm waiting for the next post @lorilikes
please go to my blog once @lorilikes
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Thank you 😊
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kiban ka nyoe teuma. pue hana pakat le. tabeu that sang malam. pu ituleih sajak nyan, ek lagei nyoe sedih teuh, teubak kameu rere ie mata teuh. hom hai....
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Nyan keuh @rikaz87 sampek dilon hana kutu'oh comentr post @lorilikes
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Translate this to be polite please. Thank you.
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the language of aceh @lorilikes
which means poetry is very sad and teary when we read it, they are very touched @lorilikes
I am also deeply moved
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We care about the sad meaning of the poem, the poet must be wrote the the fact of life. If yes, that mean you are in sadness. Hope every thing is fine.
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It is oke friend. It all about the feeling
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i like the girl on your picture.
can i take it?
thanks @lorilikes
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You are allowed to use that image yes.
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Woow .... beautiful and nice poems
I like on all lines
And the picture is good too
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just mind blowing poetry.
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The poem you post really touches my heart. your poetry is very good I love your poetry @lorilikes bolehkah learn poetry with you. I love all the poems you post @lorilikes
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Awww....beautiful poetry
I love first two lines
And image looks awesome😍😗☺
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@lori, help me .
@sndbox asked me to send 0001 to @steemauto
but all sbd me taken
Plesae help me
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I have no idea what this is. Please share it in steemit chat- hope they can help. Sorry bud.
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no what @liri.
they will see my post.
I have made a post.
hope someone will understand.
thanks @lorilikes
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Good work keep it up.
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really amazing .. i like your post
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Hy...my inspirations @lorilikes
a very touching poem, every meaning permeates my inner, I really want to write beautiful like this.
you are a great writer @lorilikes
I'm glad to see you smile and a savior has come into your life
When your heart is vulnerable you come across as a new spirit in my life You are the savior of my heart And as time passes you deeper into that which I hope fill the empty space in my heart, you also give new color in my every step
Thanks you so much my inspirations @lorilikes
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