I appreciate the effort put into this article, but if you're going to call out somebody on their grammar, you really should check your own first. For example, "these money" doesn't sound like English to me. This money or these monies would be more appropriate. And I would have said "grammatical errors" as opposed to "grammar errors" if I were trying to be grammatically correct. Wouldn't be as big a deal if you weren't throwing stones at someone else's grammar. Just a thought.