Steemit Slam #1 Poem: Unexpected DeparturesteemCreated with Sketch.

in slam •  8 years ago  (edited)

Autumn rain wetted her hair
Soft, like a morning kiss,
Adding chill to the tragedy, and
Blistering every solemn footstep
As she walked alone in great grief
From an unexpected departure with love.

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Very nice! Thanks for taking part! :)

Thank you.

Exactly......

Brief, imagistic, and beautiful. I really enjoyed it :)