"Echo Chamber" a sonnet of love

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In my heart there is a chamber,
It echoes with your name.
Resonant memories of love,
Cold ashes that remain.

Hindsight, like viewing a tunnel;
Burning fire at the end.
And resounding down all its length;
My fervent cries of pain.

I recall our cries of passion,
Enthralled with lust we’d lie.
Still, in the end I rise up loved,
Voice uttering a sigh.

I have my memories of you,

You will always be nigh

“Echo Chamber"
a sonnet
by
Jerry E Smith
©4/28/17


These .gifs were created for me by @coquiunlimited; many thanks




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      ·  7 years ago 

    Beautiful heart felt words @jerrytsuseer laden with poignancy and sweet memories.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Thank you @trudeehunter. These were not true words of memory, as
    Sadly, I've never really felt that sort of love, therefore not
    Experienced that sort of loss. I wrote this by
    Putting myself in that frame of
    Mind, then writing how
    I would feel

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Oh......this is such a sad face Jerry. It’s never too late to find that kind of love but obviously you’ll not want the heartache. Sometimes one can’t have one without the other. 😥

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Too true. I wrote one a couple of years ago, then posted it here in Steemit
        Sometime in the past 8 months, about my alone-ness.
        I'll try to find it for you, if you'd like

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Just wonderful... I really like it...
          sorry I was busy few days.. That's why I didn't see your some post...

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              ·  7 years ago 

            Thank you @heart0048, I have been extremely busy as well.

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                ·  7 years ago 

              It's alright. I hope you will be free in short time...

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