Hoy amor mio debo confesarte que te deseo
aunque muchas veces contigo me haga el duro,
hoy tratare de ser sincero y espontáneo
porque este amor por ti ya no lo disimuló.
El día que te llegue a tener te haré el amor de tal manera
que mi nombre quedara tatuado en cada centímetro de tu piel,
esta amor ya no es una cosa cualquiera
pues ya llegamos al punto donde nos damos placer.
Aunque ya por fin te he tenido en mi cama
debo confesarte que aun de ti no me quito estas ganas,
hoy me confieso un devoto de todo tu cuerpo
ya que para mi es ahora mi mayor entretenimiento.
Conseguir a alguien que nos mantenga con ese deseo de querer mas, es vivir la vida a plenitud. muy bien mi hermano @adrian11
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gracias hermano.
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Me encanto este post, sigue asi que estas mejorando cada dia mas.
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gracias mi amor por el apoyo, se te quiere.
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Bellas palabras.
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gracias
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Me encantó...
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me alegra saberlo
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muy bueno
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gracias
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Excelente interpretación puedes intentar hacer relatos eróticos son geniales yo he hecho unos cuantos 🤗
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pronto puede que me meta de lleno en eso jajaja, muchas gracias
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"Debo confesarte que aun de ti no me quito estas ganas" .
Me gusto mucho tu poema en serio que si 🙈
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que bueno que te gusto :)
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Me traicionó el inconsciente en ese verso que terminaba en "úlo" no voy a decir con que lo hubiera rimado yo en la siguiente linea XD
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créeme que yo también lo pensé pero bueno, tenia que portarme bien jajaa
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Excelente post!!
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gracias
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Bello tu poema @adrian11, me encantó, felicidades!!!
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que bueno, muchas gracias.
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muy hermosa poema compañero.
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gracias hermano
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¡Upaaaa Adrian se nos puso sensual hoy! escribiré lo que pensé sin tabus mientras leía: ¡Que rico es sentirse así! (blushed) jajajaj. Sigue así, saludos.
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jajajaja upa esa es la idea.
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Sutil e intenso a la vez. Sigue mejorando que vas muy bien. Saludos.
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gracias mi amor
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Excelentes versos, muy intensos. Un saludo.
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gracias saludos
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Excelente , me encantó. Éxitos
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graciaaas
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Llegué yo a oderte la paciencia con mis.
RECOMENDACIONES UHAHAHAHA.
Ojo con las etiquetas, revisa si existen y si te generan visualizaciones, no es una limitante en realidad puedes usar la que quieras, pero la visualización en steemit es tan limitada que es mejor aprovechar cada etiqueta.
Al principio no entendí la redacción del poema, tuve que leerlo una segunda vez para entender que no es 1 poema son 3 versos en distintos tiempos. Por lo cual deberías separarlos y quizá hasta agregarle una imagen a cada uno de ellos. Para darle mas emotividad.
Para ser un post tan corto no debería tener ningún error y faltan varias tildes así que te invito a colocarlos en sus lugares. Al igual que en: "esta amor ya no es una" imagino que es "este". Revisa varias veces tu post antes de publicar para evitar estos detallitos.
Ok, ya dejemos a un lado la ogra que hay en mi jeje.
Me encanta que con tan pocas palabras puedas contar un gran historia y muy intensa, eso ese es todo un reto para cualquier escritor y a ti te salió de forma natural.
Me gusta que no uses palabras rebuscadas sino que das en el clavo con cada una de ellas.
Sigue así al parecer la escritura erótica es lo tuyo.%20(498).png)
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gracias odiosota love you
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