Y te vas, dejando solo las ganas
de amanecer contigo todas las mañanas,
de amarte todas mis madrugadas,
y te vas, dejando solo palabras que hicieron soñar despierto
a este corazón que ha quedado tan desierto.
Y te vas, dejando lleno de besos mi colchón y mis huesos,
y te vas, dejando tu aroma en mi almohada y en mis dedos,
y te vas, dejando un vacío que se convertirá en hastío.
Y te vas, dejando solo esta incertidumbre
de este amor que nunca ha sido
y no importa qué tanto la vida nos haya unido
siempre está ahí ese destino, para armar varios líos
y separar lo que Dios jamás ha prometido.
Y te vas, dejando un corazón gravemente confundido
que no sabe si esperar para así algún día vivir este amor
como siempre hemos querido.
Amor de antaño
Entregar todo con pasión
Otras publicaciones:
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Ella es ausencia en su presencia
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Hola @andreamsulba!, saludos de parte del equipo de curación de @bebeth
Notamos que tienes una imagen que no te pertenece en el post click aqui y aqui, te recomendamos que cuando realices eso coloques la fuente de la imagen para no ser acusada de plagio.
Esfuérzate y crea contenido de calidad, esperamos ver mas contenido pronto!.
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que bonito poema ademas muy buena redaccion de tu post un beso un abrazo te sigo
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Gracias amor por tus palabras tan lindas, saludos.
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Me encantó tu poema. Describe el amor y el desamor de una manera especial.
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Gracias amiga, exactamente eso quería describir. Saludos.
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Que bien escribes súper @andremsulba bueno nos seguiremos mutuamente... un abrazo!
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Gracias amiga, un placer tenerte por aquí, besos y abrazos.
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Escribes muy bien, me encanta la poesía y me da gusto encontrar acá en Steemit personas que hagan lo mismo que yo.
Esta parte me gustó.
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Gracias amigo, es un placer que mis letras gusten a gente interesada en poesía, agradecida por el tiempo que dedicaste en leerme.
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Hermoso, hermoso, hermoso!!!
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Una mas de tu estupendas creaciones, Besos y abrazos @andreamsulban
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Gracias amigazo, tus comentarios significan mucho para mi.
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que linda prosa tienes, me quedo con esta frase "tanto la vida nos haya unido siempre está ahí ese destino"... Gracias por compartir tu post
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Muy bonito poema, felicidades.
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Gracias amiguita. Saludos.
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Genial tu aporte Andrea, sigue con ese cerebro tan bonito , saludos
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Hola amigo, muchas gracias por tu comentario y por tomarte el tiempo para leerme. besos
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Con mucho gusto Andrea, te invito a pasarte por mi perfil, tal vez encuentres algo de tu interés, saludos
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Muy sentimental y lleno de intensidad, te quedo bien mi amor Exitos.
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Gracias mi vida, saludos.
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Que belleza de poema y la presentación esta muy femenina felicitaciones.
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Gracias amiguita, besos.
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Me sentí identificado, sé lo que es un amor que no llegó a ser. Saludos.
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Gracias mi vida, siempre es un placer poder llegar a los corazones de alguna manera.
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Cuando vi el título y la imagen de portada, en lo primero que pensé fue en infinity war jajajaja, pero bueno, en fin... me gustó tu poema, está bueno :)
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Gracias amiga.
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Hermoso andrea te felicito! tienes muy buen contenido en poemas!
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Gracias amiga, lindas palabras.
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Que bello amiga, gran poema lleno de sentimiento
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Gracias nena por tu comentario. (:
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Te vas. Muy bonito, permite empaparse y sentirlo. Te felicito @andreamsulba
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Gracias amor, saludos.
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Hermoso poema @andreamsulba. Dejas ver la parte más bonita de ti en él. Espero continuar leyendote. Un beso.
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Gracias amigo, espero sigas pasándote por aquí. Es un placer para mi que me leas.
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Muy bonito. Me gusta tu estilo. Me transmites la sensación de extrañar a alguien que se va, alguien que quiero tener cerca.
Gracias por regalarnos esto.
D.
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Amigo exactamente lo que quise interpretar, gracias por el comentario.
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hola un saludo @andreamsulba lindo poema saludos espero seguir leyendo tus poemas :)
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Hola amigo, muchas gracias por tomarte un tiempo para leerme, saludos.
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Que hermoso. te espero por mi blog.
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Gracias amiga, no lo dudes estaré por allá.
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Gracias por compartirnos tus creaciones poéticas. Hermoso y cargado de sentimiento.
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Gracias linda, por tu comentario, espero que mis letras sigan siendo de tu agrado.
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Esta hermoso, tu poema querida Andrea♥
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Gracias linda, espero seguirte teniendo por aquí, saludos.
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Muy bello poema, muy bien logrado. Saludos y abrazos.
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Gracias amor, besos.
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Describes el amor y el desamor de una manera muy particular. Muy buen post!
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Cuando puedas lee mi ultimo poema dedicado a los besos..
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Claro que sí, me pasaré por allí, gracias por tus lindas palabras amiga.
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Me gustó mucho, es muy dulce y tierno.
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Gracias @megaela, un honor que te haya gustado.
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Andrea, que hermoso poema. Siempre me ha encantado la poesía y me anima mucho leer a personas como tú con talento. ¡Gracias por compartir!
Saludos, un abrazo.
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Gracia mi amiga, tus palabras me alegran el alma.
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Leído, disfrutado y votado @andreamsulba
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Gracias amiga, saludos.
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Que bonito poema @andreamsulba se ve que estabas muy inspirada cuando lo escribiste
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Gracias amigo, en realidad sí.
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¡Qué bonito! letras con mucho sentimiento
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Hermoso Poema, Tienes mi ApoyoLinda... Saludos
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Gracias amor. Saludos para ti también.
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Buen poema te felicito.
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Muchas gracias.
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bello poema te felicito
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Gracias amiga.
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Muy hermoso y melancólico. Saludos. :)
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Gracias por el comentario amor.
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"Todo lo que dejas y aún así te vas"... Hermoso poema, saludos!
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Si, que bueno que te gusto. Me da placer eso.
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muy lindo poema
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Toy namorao de tu poema... Tierno
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Que lindo amor.
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Muy lindo poema.
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Gracias linda.
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Amiga buena presentacion y muy buen contenido te felicito.
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Gracias amigos de una milla mas, besos y abrazos.
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Excelente . Dios te Bendiga
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Gracias amigo. Amén.
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Ya es tarde para el voto, pero el comentario nunca está de más:
¡Me encantó!
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Gracias amiga, así es, siempre el comentario vale un millón.
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Qué hermoso poema, me has atrapado por completo. Un saludo.
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Gracias amor, que lindo leer esos comentarios, saludos.
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