Concurso: Una oda a mi ciudad- Mi Cumaná

in spanish •  7 years ago 

Saludos, amigos de Steemit.

Con gran orgullo participo en el Primer Concurso Artístico: "Una Oda A Mi Ciudad". Agradezco al equipo de @venebohemians por esta gran iniciativa y por la oportunidad.

He escrito un poema a Cumaná, la tierra que me vio nacer y en la que vivo. Este poema tiene tres estrofas denominadas cuartetas compuestas por versos octosílabos de arte menor, de rima consonante (abab).

Invito a que participen, todavía hay tiempo, les dejo el link aquí. Suerte para todos los concursantes.

Mi Cumaná


Mi Cumaná amada y bella
yo te traigo aquí mi canto.
En tu castillo de estrella
yo disfruto de tu encanto.



Santa Inés y el Manzanares
son testigos de la historia,
quien visita nuestros lares
los atrapa en la memoria.

Cumaná, mi marinera
de crepúsculos gloriosos,
mi Cumaná quién te viera
con un futuro grandioso.

Las fotografías son de mi archivo personal.

spanish venebohemios cervantes concurso poema
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      ·  7 years ago 

    Bello, quedó hermoso @aurodivys, mucha suerte, aunque creo que agarras podio, saludos

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Gracias, @valenta. que así sea!

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Esta genial. ;)

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Muchas gracias, @richjr.

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              ·  7 years ago 

            ¡Te quedó genial! Las imágenes son las ideales para cada estrofa. Suerte.

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                ·  7 years ago 

              Mil gracias, cariño!

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                Me gustó tu poema <3

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  Qué alegría que te haya gustado, @mariart1. Mil gracias.

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    Yo he ido mucho a la primogénita pero ya llevo tambien tiempo sin ir pero la adoro....

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                        ·  7 years ago 

                      Gracias por el cariño a Cumaná!

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                          ·  7 years ago 

                        Lo leí y me transporté una década atrás, cuando me hacías poesías para que me las aprendiera y recitara en actos académicos.
                        Muy bonita, @aurodivys.

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                            ·  7 years ago (edited)

                          Me alegra que guardes esos recuerdos, mi querida @sofiaquino98. Mil gracias, un abrazote en la distancia.

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                              ·  7 years ago 

                            Excelente poema, el cual le dedicas a nuestra Cumaná.

                            Un saludo desde mi cocina

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                                ·  7 years ago 

                              Gracias, dulce amiga!

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                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                ¡Digno de ser acompañado con arpa, cuatro y maraca! ¡Exquisita oda, @aurodivys! ¡Éxitos! Luego vuelvo por acá.

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                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                  Gracias, @gythanobonfak. Pongámosle música, pues!

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                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                    Es muy sonoro, cuartetas musicales. Felicidades, aurodivys

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                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                      Muy agradecida por tu comentario, @petronila.

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                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                        Sale cantaito ❤ hermoso ❤

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                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                          Me alegra que te haya gustado, mi querida @isauris.

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                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                            Me encantó ♥ Éxitos amiga. Y aprovecho invitarte para que visites mi blog ☺ Te tengo un reto que espero aceptes amiga @aurodivys ☺

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                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                              Hola, @parauri. Mil gracias. Ya reviso a ver de qué trata el reto.

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                                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                                Ok :)

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                                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                                  Definitivamente usted es poeta. Bellas palabras para Cumaná. Saludos @aurodivys

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                                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                                    Amiga, @marcybetancourt, me halaga tu comentario. Mil gracias.

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                                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                                      ¡Saludos a la gente de Cumaná, un placer participar en este grandioso concurso!

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                                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                                        Gracias y suerte para ti también.

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                                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                                          Estaba pendiente de darle mi apoyo a este hermoso y rítmico poema que le dedicas Cumaná, tierra de atardeceres, de poesía, de joropo estribillo y de gente de gran corazón como tú. Un abrazo, amiga. Suerte en el concurso.

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                                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                                            Gracias, amiga. Me alegra que te guste. Un abrazo.

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                                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                                              Afectuoso, musical y representatitvo homenaje poético a Cumaná, apreciada @aurodivys. Te estás destacando como una autora de poemas, práctica que bien vale la pena sostener y ampliar. ¡Adelante y suerte!

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