Amarte | Poema y autorretrato

in spanish •  7 years ago  (edited)

La vida intenta imponernos el atardecer.

Nos negamos a él, 

pero lo sabemos ahí,

agazapado.


En la espera, lo lejano.

Cada vez que se aproxima, busco una nueva cumbre,

la escalo y lo retraso.


Amarte es eso.

Escalar cumbres y bajar laderas dulces, 

descender a valles frondosos, 

escuchar cantos de pájaros. 


Todavía nos faltan algunos por identificar, 

otros que todavía ignoramos,

incluso los hay que vienen de camino.

¡Ah, el vuelo del ave, su trino innominado!


Amarte es esperar el trino de un pájaro 

que llega volando desde lejos.

Autorretrato, 19 abril, 2017. Caracas, Venezuela.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Linda composición de letras. Tienes mi voto.

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Enjoy the vote and reward!

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Thank you!

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          ·  7 years ago 

        I don't know if it was for the guy who comment or me hahaha, thank you for the support anyway, lots of love <3

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            ·  7 years ago 

          xD

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              ·  7 years ago 

            Gracias!!!

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                ·  7 years ago 

              Siempre es un placer leerte, amiga. Como siempre tienes mi voto!

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                Wonderful. Upvoted

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  Me gustó mucho tu poesía, directa y llena de instantes que se van. Por cierto tienes una errata en la segunda estrofa, primer verso. «En la espera, qo lejano.»

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    Muchas gracias! Menos mal te diste cuenta, ya lo cambié! Te sigo, un beso.

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                        ·  7 years ago 

                      ¡Sencillamente hermoso/a!

                      Haciendo referencia al poema y al retrato.

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                          ·  7 years ago 

                        Muchas gracias Nicole, me hace muy feliz leerte en los comentarios, un besote.

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                            ·  7 years ago 

                          Excelente post, sigue asi. Ya tienes un seguidor mas.
                          Chequea mi post: https://steemit.com/history/@mpfiguera/de-un-dibujo-a-un-sentimiento#comments

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                              ·  7 years ago 

                            Gracias!! Te sigo de vuelta, ya me paso por tu blog!

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                                ·  7 years ago 

                              Me encanto leerte saludos!!

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                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                Muchas gracias Ros!!

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                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                  Hermoso. Bravo.

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                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                    Gracias!!! Te sigo, un beso.

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                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                      Excelente post, muy completo, tienes un nuevo seguidor y mi voto, espero que pases por mi pagina y veas mi trabajo, saludos y bendiciones.

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                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                        Muchísimas gracias por el apoyo!

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                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                          interesante, me encanto leerte , te sigo y apoyo

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                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                            Muchas gracias, saludos!! Te sigo de vuelta

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                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                              Buen trabajo! tienes mi voto!

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                                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                                Muy bueno, espero te pases por mi perfil. Saludos.

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                                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                                  Muchísimas gracias!

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                                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                                    Qué bonito poema.

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                                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                                      Gracias!! Te sigo.

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                                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                                        Me ha encantado la obstinación perseverante de alargar el amor aún sospechando su inevitable culminación en algún punto, al menos es lo que me has transmitido en una parte de tu bello poema. Que bueno que pude pasearme un rato por tu blog. ¡Me encanta tu arte! ¡Qué se exalte la expresión!

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                                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                                          Me encanto!
                                                          Ya te sigo que no te tenia querida @brendahcaroline
                                                          Gracias por compartir tu contenido.
                                                          Hasta pronto!!!
                                                          Que tengas un gran día.

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                                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                                            Geniaaal!! Qué bien que te gustara!! En un rato publico otro, un beso

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                                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                                              Buen poema y lindo retrato. ¡Saludos!

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                                                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                                                Ernesto!! Gracias!

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                                                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                                                  Lindo retrato y lindo poema <3 cuando quieras te pasas a mi blog a ver si te gusta algo, saludos y sigue escribiendo que tienes mucho talento

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                                                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                                                    Gracias, qué bonita, ya me pasoo!!

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                                                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                                                      Qué lindo poema! Me gustaron mucho las imágenes que utilizaste y la forma en que lo escribiste en general, además de la fotografía, que complementa bien el texto. Te sigo y te voto, un abrazo desde Valera!

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                                                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                                                        Muchas gracias! Ya te sigo de vuelta.

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                                                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                                                          Me enamore de tu blog..

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