Ausencia (Poema)

in spanish •  7 years ago  (edited)

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Ausencia y soledad, impune e inerte,
silenciosa pero cruel, dura y muchas veces forzosa,
lastiman sin sentido a un corazón que quiere,
a un corazón que ama, a un corazón que está remendado.

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Solo queda levantar mi cabeza,
mirar hacia adelante
y con mis puños en alto, luchar.
Luchar contra la adversidad, avanzar,
esperando que un día esta lejanía se acorte.

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Que tu mirada, por fin, no sea solo la calidez de mi almohada solitaria
sino un sublime aliento cada mañana
y no solo verte en la inmensidad de mis sueños
sino al despertar de ellos.

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Cuando lo vivido se convierte en recuerdos
y los recuerdos en anhelos,
te das cuenta que,
la añoranza es el extrañar a esa otra parte de tu alma
que por fin encontraste.

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Paciente espero el momento, colmada de fortaleza.
Deseo transformar estos versos y ser algo más.
Alejar de una vez las añoranzas del tiempo.
Que seamos uno para siempre, anhelo.
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      ·  7 years ago 

    Un éxito total lo logrado con este texto. Me ganaste con esto:

    "...y no solo verte en la inmensidad de mis sueños, sino al despertar de ellos..."

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Que bueno mi lindo que te gustara el post y te llegara ese sentimiento de nostalgia un gran saludo!

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Wow...! Sin palabras! Qué belleza, cuánta nostalgia... además de la exquisita presentación!!! Bello, coma, felicidades y mucho éxito!

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Gracias comaee por tu apoyo incondicinal un beshooo!!

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              ·  7 years ago 

            huy, que dulce... modo ají dulce... un besote...Excelente...

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                ·  7 years ago 

              Graciasss, esta no es mi área,y me alegra que te gustara. Saludos!!

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                Que lindura de creación. Te felicito Mariantonia, te vas superando más y más.

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                    ·  7 years ago (edited)

                  Mariantonieto, gracias por tu ayuda y siempre apoyo, un gran abrazo.

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    Triple wow, que belleza de presentación y ni hablar de las palabras,

                    Deseo transformar estos versos y ser algo más.
                    Alejar de una vez las añoranzas del tiempo.
                    Que seamos uno para siempre, anhelo.

                    Super brutal.

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                        ·  7 years ago 

                      Compadre Meguis gracias por tu ayuda y por el apoyo que siempre nos brindas.

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                          Thanks

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                              ·  7 years ago 

                            Que hermoso! Tanto sentimiento. Excelente te felicito.

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                                ·  7 years ago 

                              Awww gracias amiga por ese apoyo y me alegra que te halla gustado. Saludos

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                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                Bello poema que desnudan versos desde el alma..! ¡Votado por Engranaje..!

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                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                  Gracias por el apoyo

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                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                    Hermosas palabras, para describir un sentimiento tan fuerte como es la soledad, a veces buena, a veces mala. Saludos

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                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                      Gracias totales, me alegro haberte transmitido el sentimiento es lo que se quiere en un poema

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                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                        Ligeramente nostálgico y hermoso al mismo tiempo...
                                        Me encantó leerte y además el diseño, las hojas azules al caer....

                                        Genial<3

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                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                          Gracias corazon, me alegra que te gustara me tomo tiempo realizar el maquetado

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                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                            excelente creatividad !felicitaciones muy lindo !

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                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                              Muchisimas gracias por tus palabras.

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                                                  Thanks!

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                                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                                    Cargado de sentimientos...hermosa la presentación.

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                                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                                      Gracias amiga me alegra que te gustara y que te transmitiera sentimientos

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                                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                                          Gracias por el apoyo

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                                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                                            Me encanta el efecto. Está precioso!

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                                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                                              Que bueno te gusto amiga. Saludos

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                                                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                                                ¡Simplemente precioso!

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                                                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                                                  Gracias!!!!!

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                                                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                                                      Gracias por el apoyo

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                                                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                                                        ¡Felicidades! Este post obtuvo upvote y fue compartido por @la-colmena, un proyecto de Curación Manual para la comunidad hispana de steemit. Si quieres saber mas sobre nuestro proyecto acompáñanos en #la-colmena, nuestro canal de discord dentro de Curation Collective

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                                                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                                                          Gracias por el apoyo

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                                                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                                                            Hermoso, mucho sentimiento en cada palabra, cada frase...

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                                                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                                                              Gracias Mari, me alegra haberte transmitido es sentimiento de nostalgia. Saludos!

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                                                                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                                                                Hola @chilix, muy bonito y lindo poema. mucho sentimiento :) un saludo

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                                                                                  Gracias Daniel por el apoyo. Saludos

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                                                                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                                                                    Hermoso poema. Nunca te había visto explorar las ramas literarias ( o quizás no me habia topado con nada antes) pero me encanta, está embargado de nostalgia. Lovely!

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