que sin tí el mundo se torna de otro color.
Bebiste del elixir de mi vida,
devoraste con esmero el amor de mis besos,
abrazaste mi piel desgastada
y viste todos mis defectos.
¿No te fui lo suficiente?
o te superé y llené de miedos tus sentimientos.
¿Qué fue? ¿Qué hice? ¿Qué pasó?
Mis pasos se están alejando,
con lentitud, pesados,
rumbo lejos de ti, lejos de mi,
tan lejos hasta perder la sombra de tus ojos en los míos.
Me detengo a recobrar aliento
lo único que hago es esperar
con agua de rosas y miel,
con la esperanza de endulzarte la mirada.
Vuelve a mi aunque haga daño,
porque más daño nos ha hecho
el alejarnos de nuestros besos.
El agua de rosas son mis lagrimas y la miel son mis ojos
Encontré un centenar de rosas un poco marchitas de regreso a casa y no pude evitar recogerlas para tomarme fotos con ellas.
Muy lindo, la foto de portada es impactante, continúa mejorando ¡Ovación de pie..!
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Por supuesto, mejorar para seguir transmitir bonitos pensamientos.
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Miel de versos que se concatena con sentimientos del alma..! ¡Votado por Engranaje..!
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Muy bello poema, te felicito.
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Esta muy lindo, sencillo y unico. El maquetado esta chevere. Saludos
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Este post transmite mucha ternura. Te felicito y te doy la bienvenida @debbiebeats éxitos.
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Me encantó, que lindo escribes, buenas imágenes, saludos debbie
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Está muy bonito. Me gusta como se mueven las letras en tu banner. Saludos :)
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No soy amante de las flores pero me encanto la manera como la utilizaste para tus fotos. Felicidades.
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Me encantó tu trabajo, bonito poema y hermosas imágenes, sigue adelante.
No dudes consultar cualquier cosa, espero ser de ayuda para ti. @debbiebeats
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Mas lindo lo de las rosas. jjeje felicidades
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🎶(Con mil rosas para mí)🎶
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Muy lindo, éxitos para ti. Excelentes fotos. Agua de rosas
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Hermoso post, me encanto
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Bella composición y las fotos me encantaron.
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precioso... tienes buena fotogenia con la cámara...Excelente..... un besote...
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Bellísimas fotos, excelente escrito. Felicidades.
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Hermoso post @debbiebeasts, un texto muy limpio y fluido y la representación excelente.
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Tienes buenas letras e imágenes. Además, el MD de la publicación te queda espectacular. Con las fotos, das cierto aire místico.
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Claro. Con las flores pareces una elfa de las películas del señor de los anillos.
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Bella @debbiebeasts Bebiste del elixir de mi vida,
devoraste con esmero el amor de mis besos,
abrazaste mi piel desgastada
y viste todos mis defectos. cuanto poder hay en cada verso, te felicito bienvenida fuerte abrazo.
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Que hermoso post. ¡Me encantó!
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Tus ojos me encantan
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simplemente hermosa poesía!
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