Hola buenas noches, Angeles oscuros hoy les comparto un nuevo escrito
Espero les guste y comenten que opinan.
Recordando tus manos en mi cuello
mientras te susurré al odio lo mucho
que te quería y de que por ti moría
mientras los ángeles caían del cielo,
vestidos de rojo,en honor a tus pecado
y desaparecieron bajando hasta el Hades,
mientras se veía la silueta de un hombresillo
con una gran sonrisa burlona esperándote,
tan solo en unos minutos tu también
desapareciste para siempre.
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Muchas Gracias por leer.
Guaoo que intenso
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Hola Gracias.
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Wooww
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Hola,Gracias.
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Me gusta mucho este poema. Yo tengo que usar un diccionario para algunas palabras, pero estoy contento ques lo hizo.
I do not speak Spanish very well, but I was able to read your poem with the help of a dictionary. I loved the intense scenery of the hands around the neck and the juxtaposition of whispers of hate. It is a great poem.
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WOW ! THANKS FRIEND ;)
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Excelente escritura amiga (Y) Muy buena, te invito a seguirme y motivarte más. Saludos
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Gracias amigo,si ya te estoy siguiendo. Saludos desde Guarico-Venezuela.
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Gracias excelente poema, espero continúes colocando otros tan bueno como este!
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