Tu Desprecio

in spanish •  6 years ago  (edited)

Hola Ángeles Oscuros,el día de hoy les traigo otro bello poema creado por mi que nació gracias a una ruptura pasada, acompáñenme a la hora de la fantasía.


Mis palabras eran flores
que te entregaba con amor
pero tu indecisión seco el
arbusto de donde cortaba
las rosas más bellas para ti

Tu eras mi escape
siempre cuando te encontraba
podía jurar que soñaba y
descansaba en unas nubes
tan suaves como tu piel la melodía
que escuchaba provenía de tu dulce boca
difícil de olvidar pero los lobos te acecharon
y tu lo permitiste logrando arrebatarte por
completo de mi hasta que deje de escucharte

Hoy encima de tu tumba
me despido de ti por completo
te borro del único lugar donde vivías
en mis pensamientos oscuros
y si he traído conmigo esas bellas
rosas que alguna vez te regalaba
solo que ahora están pintadas en un oscuro
color están marchitas

Por tu desprecio.


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      ·  6 years ago 

    Está bastante bien, sigue asi chica un saludo

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        ·  6 years ago 

      Gracias amigo,saludos.

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          ·  6 years ago 

        Excelente poema, sigue escribiendo y regalándonos tu talento. saludos!

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            ·  6 years ago 

          Muchas Gracias amigo,buen día.

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              ·  6 years ago 

            Bonito poema aunque me dio miedo la foto jajajaja Saludos y mis respetos mi apoyo con mi voto.

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                ·  6 years ago 

              Jajajaj es una mascara muy bloody , Saludos muchas gracias.

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                  ·  6 years ago 

                Muy buen poema. Me gustó.
                Esto lo sentí en el alma:

                Mis palabras eran flores
                que te entregaba con amor
                pero tu indecisión seco el
                arbusto de donde cortaba
                las rosas más bellas para ti

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                    ·  6 years ago 

                  Gracias me alegra que te haya gustado.

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                      ·  6 years ago 

                    Dulce foto! Jjjj saludos.

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                        ·  6 years ago 

                      Jejje Gracias,ahora te visito.

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                          ·  6 years ago 

                        Intenso y hermoso felicidades.

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                            ·  6 years ago 

                          Muchas Gracias,amigo saludos.

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                              ·  6 years ago 

                            Me gusto ! :) mi parte favorita!
                            "podía jurar que soñaba y
                            descansaba en unas nubes
                            tan suaves como tu piel la melodía"

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                                ·  6 years ago 

                              Hola me alegra que te haya gustado esa parte
                              Muchas Gracias, saludos.

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