De mi útero sangre mana,
cinco días de la semana.
No me toques.
No me llames.
Quizá mejore mañana.
Vientos que en mi vientre anidan,
amargándome la vida.
No me toques.
No me hables.
No deseo medicina.
Dolor que ataca mis piernas,
en los huesos se me interna.
No me toques.
No me mires.
El disgusto me gobierna.
Doblada en forma fetal,
para cierto alivio hallar.
No me toques.
No te acerques.
La cama podría manchar.
El calor me está sofocando,
pero el frío lo está agravando.
No me toques.
¡Ni respires!
¡No quiero seguir sangrando!
Ilustración: @elelobos
Otros poemas de mi autoría que te podrían gustar:
ETÉREA
UN FINAL REAL
LA TOALLA
MERCADO DE PULGAS
ADENTRO, PROFUNDO
LÁGRIMAS
SUMERGIDA
Esta obra está bajo una Licencia Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial 4.0 International
Vaya, creo que encontraste una forma muy original de plantear ese tema. Felicitaciones.
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Gracias! Eso me emociona ^_^
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Como siempre tus poemas son una Rapsodia colorida de sentimientos, me gusta mucho, Saludos estimada amiga @elelobos... ;-)
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Gracias, mi amor! Este poema tenía que hacerlo si o si xD Me alegra que te gustara. Besos!
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Muy original, me gusto!
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Gracias, @edmundocentenor! Esperaba más respuesta femenina pero hasta ahora casi todos los comentarios son de hombres xD Eso es bueno.
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Es el mejor poema que haya leído sobre la menstruación.
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Me halagas, Sei! Yo no he leído ninguno sobre la menstruación; aunque me encantaría. Solo recuerdo la canción de Arjona xD
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Un poema original y buen uso de la rima, te sigo leyendo, sigue escribiendo. Un saludo:)
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Gracias, bella! :) Abrazos!
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Muy original. Fuera de lo convencional y de una musicalidad tan provocativa que prácticamente se convierte en canción.
Tus escritos sonstituyen un reto del cual sales muy bien librada.
Un abrazo
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Gracias, amiga! No sabes cuánto aprecio tus comentarios :)
Abrazos.
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Gracias por escribir por cosas que son tan naturales y poco divulgados, te felicito!
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Gracias, amor ^_^ Un abrazote.
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Le queda perfecto a tu poema llamarlo "Oda a la Menstruación". Ese "No me Toques" tan repetitivo cada vez que están en esos días y uno con ganas de estar cerca de uds. Excelente
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jajajaj Es que lo último que quiero cuando estoy en mis días es que me toquen! Déjennos sufrir en paz! xD
Un abrazo :)
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Se me puso la piel de gallina sentí el poema esta muy bello. Y habla sobre la realidad que en esos días toda mujer sufre. Un abrazo :)
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No sé si todas pero sí unas cuantas. Yo incluida XD
Me alegra que lo hayas sentido. El poema lo escribí no solo para desahogarme sino también para que los hombres se hicieran una idea de lo que tenemos que soportar algunas.
Gracias por pasar, mi cielo ;) Abrazos.
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Que bien escrito y es muy expresivo, he pasado por estos períodos asi de terribles y me identifico totalmente, saludos
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Gracias! :) Lamento que también tengas que pasar por todo eso; es un martirio. Abrazos.
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Genial poema!
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jaja gracias!
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Excelente como describes esos días. Muy original. Te felicito.
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Gracias, Analiese! Un abrazo :)
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¡Qué original! me ha causado un poco de gracia ya que me he identificado justamente en esos días desagradables. Saludos <3
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Gracias! :) Mis días son bastante horribles la verdad xD
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Animos, Animos!
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No me escribas!! (es broma) ^_^
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Mil gracias, @c-squared!
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Muy agradecida! ^_^
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Qué maravillosa manera de expresar lo que callamos las mujeres mes a mes.
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Gracias, @gorayii! :) Un abrazo
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Such sense of originality. Deep. And sparing nothing in expressing the issue of mensis. A bloody piece of beautiful poetry, I dare say...
By the way, you don't have to write in English, @elelobos. There's an English translator at the bottom of my phone. So, I can read all your Spanish works in English henceforth...
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Hey you! Love to see you here. Thats awesome. Thanks! :D
Although I think it wouldn't be bad to write one in english from time to time.
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Waooo que original tu poema ¡¡ me quito el sombrero con tu creatividad.
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Gracias, @ciberpoeta11! :D
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