Jugosa revelación
que acaba con mi aprensión.
Puedo engullirte la esencia
e invadirte la conciencia.
Tus ojos se tornan blancos
mientras pierdes la razón.
Tu placer le da sentido
a esta continua fricción.
Tengo el poder en la boca.
Tu indefensión me provoca.
Me hace sentir tan plena,
me da poder y me llena
el saber que esto te agota.
Caes rendido a mis pies
y yo te pongo un arnés.
Te he convertido en mi esclavo,
y te mantengo contento
siempre que absorbo tu aliento.
Poema e ilustración de: @elelobos
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SUMERGIDA
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Buen trabajo. Para ser honesto el tipo de rima no es mi favorita, pero manejas buenas imágenes y no caes en lugares comunes. Breve, sugerente y bien cerrado. Te ganaste mi upvote :D Saludos!
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Ea! Gracias, @bonzopoe. Abrazos!
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Me encantó tu poesía, espero seguir leyéndote, saludos:)
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Gracias, Andreis! Nos estamos leyendo :D
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muy hermoso, me gusto felicidades :3
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Epa, gracias! :)
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Está buenisima tú poesía. Muy erótico y delicado a la vez!
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Gracias, Oriana! Esa era la intención ^_^
Besos!
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Bastante bueno y a los últimos parrafos brota la imaginación
¡Saludos!
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jajaj Me alegro. Gracias, @universoperdido!
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Vaya forma de subyugar, querida poeta.
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jajajaj así es, Landis. Abrazos!
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Hermoso y sutilmente apasionado...
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Me emociona que lo pienses ^_^
Un fuerte abrazo, @oscarina!
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Excelente. Intenso y delicado. La ilustración tiene una luz espectacular. Felicitaciones.
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Gracias, Irvin! Siempre es un placer leer tus comentarios.
Abrazos!
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wow, muy intensas, y de hecho hasta provocativas letras, cosa que obviamente era la idea, y que lograste muy bien! genial :)
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Ea! Gracias, Ernesto! Me emociona que así sea :D
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Bello poema @elelobos al leerlo y ver las rimas mi corazon daba brinquitos de emocion.
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Mi corazón da brinquitos de emoción al leer tu comentario! jejeje
Abrazos!
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Hermoso poema, tiene mucho sentimiento <3
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Gracias, bella! Besos.
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Excelente despliegue de hablilidaes poéticas; musicalización y rima acompañada de la fluidez natural de palabras puntuales, eres una inspiración, saludos
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Gracias, Saulos! Me halagas demasiado.
Abrazos!
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U are great artist
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Thanks!
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Thank you
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@elelobos La delicadeza y la pasión se logra sentir al leerte. Me gusta ✨
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Qué bueno! Me alegra :) Gracias por darte una vuelta por aquí, @aguantalaopinion. Saludos!
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Guaoooo, que hermosura de poema , delirantemente exquisita tu irreverente pluma, produce una mágica ensoñación, hoy no duermo, jajaja, Saludos... ;-*
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Te costará un poco, pero al final caerás rendidito por el agotamiento ajajajjaja
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Saca un látigo. Me gusta eso del esclavo.
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Alto ahí! No soy tan ruda jajajaja Tengo otros métodos, ya ves... ;)
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Si no es para ti, lo uso yo. Igualmente ya pagué el alquiler del látigo. $$$
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jajajja No me opongo a volverme sumisa de vez en cuando...
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Me encanta más la sumisión —que me la ofrezcan—, principalmente porque quien suele controlar es el sumiso. Puede suceder. El poder es una cosa fascinante.
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Definitivamente.
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This post has received a $100.00 % upvote from @siditech thanks to: @jakim7.
Here's a banana!
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@jakim7, mi amooor! Gracias! <3 <3 <3
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Me ha gustado todo el poema pero esos versos dan el toque perfecto y son el eje de todo el poema. Me encantan tus escritos @elelobos. Me has hecho sonrojar ahora tu a mi.
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jajajaja Me la debías!
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Ni modo.Jajaja!! Estamos a mano, aunque creo que este constante sonrojamiento sera muy frecuente de parte y parte, aunque te confieso que hasta ahora creo que tienes todo para ganarme siempre. Saludos y nos seguiremos leyendo!!
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hermoso poema me gusto mucho tiene mucha pasión, saludos
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Gracias, @leonelrojas! Me alegra que te guste :)
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Un enfoque del erotismo distinto. Genial, amiga. ¿La ilustración es tuya?
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Gracias, amiga! Así es.
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Es magnífica. ¡Te felicito!
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seductoramente terrorífico!
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jajaja Gracias!
Abrazos!
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Wow! Mucha pasión, mucha intensidad en estas letras! Felicidades porque el resultado quedó estupendo! Saludos!
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Gracias, Isaura! :D
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Excelente , eres muy buena con tus escritos bien sea cuentos y ahora poesía . Un abrazo
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Gracias, @popurri! Un abrazo fuerte :)
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Un poema que transmite pasión y erotismo, un poema bien logrado. Gracias por compartirlo, @elelobos.
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Gracias, @aurodivys! :)
Un beso!
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Poema de mucha fuerza irónica y erótica, a la vez, @elelobos. Percibir la debilidad del otro en su entrega, en su abandono. Saludos.
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Así es, José. Gracias por darte una vuelta por mi nido y dejar tu valiosa apreciación ^_^ Abrazos!
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Calidadddd.... Un abrazo... Me hiciste llegar, sin tocarme... jejee... cumple la meta el poema.... Un beso...
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jajajajajajja Qué bien XD Abrazos, Eleazarvo!!
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Demasiado espectacular!!
Felicidades.
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Muchas gracias!! :D
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Felicitaciones un post bien logrado, erótico sin llegar a lo vulgar, preciso con una maquetación sobria y minimalista, sigue en esa línea, este me encantó. Saludos.
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Muchas gracias por el apoyo y el ánimo, Juan :) Y también por leerlo! Estuvo genial XD
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Un Apasionado poema, pero muy inspirador :)
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Gracias, Samuel! Saludos :)
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Me encantó. Lograste describir sentimientos intensos como la pasión de una forma muy elegante y sutil! Me gusta mucho leerte. ¡Un abrazo!
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Gracias!! Para mí es todo un logro recibir comentarios como este, y más si viene de una gran lectora y escritora como tú. Besos!
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Buen poema @elelobos, seducción con toque de sadomasoquismo, sin duda caerá rendido a tus pies! saludos
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jajaja Ya cayó jajaj Gracias!!
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Muy bueno, mi
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Gracias, gracias ^_^
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Hola @elelobos ! :) Bien intenso pero a la vez todo hecho de la manera mas calmada. Muy buen poema.
Lo tienes ganado! jaja saludos
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Gracias, @estefania3! jejej
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Apasionado e intenso poema, expresas una fuerza sutil en tus palabras y es bastante difícil de lograr. Saludos @elelobos
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Gracias, egavi! :D Abrazos!
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...bochornoso...
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jajaja Saludos, Amaponian! ;)
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Amiga, hay cosas que sólo puedo describir con la palabra genial, así encuentro este poema, genial y atrevido.
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Gracias, amiga!! :D Besos!
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Llegue tarde a leer esto pero que decir.. sin palabras. Una experiencia leerte. Saludos @elelobos
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Por supuesto que no llegaste tarde, Oswaldo. Nunca se llega tarde a un poema. Lo que si me da curiosidad es saber cómo llegaste a mi escrito XD
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