ROJA [poesía]

in spanish •  6 years ago  (edited)

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ROJA


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Roja

como la sangre que corre

sucia y agria por tus venas,

destruyendo tus entrañas,

sumergiéndote en la pena.


Roja

como los labios delgados

que ya no ríen y callan

el tormento que te agobia,

la abrumadora batalla.


Roja

como la rosa que otrora

iluminó tu mirada,

rosa astuta y ponzoñosa

que vil espina ocultaba.


Roja

como el maldito deseo

que condenó tu destino,

apenando tu existencia,

acortando tu camino.


Roja

Q.E.P.D.

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Fotografía de Mouhaned Derbal en Unsplash editada en Adobe Photoshop CS6.


Posted from my blog with SteemPress : https://elelobos.timeets.com/index.php/2018/11/23/roja-poesia/

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      ·  6 years ago 
    HEY, ME ENCANTÓ. Lo leí rápidamente, por lo que noté de una vez el sonido de las rimas, luego lo re - leí y entendí el significado, y además, mientras lo leía las dos veces, escuchaba una canción relacionada al tema, lo cual representa una enorma casualidad. Muy lindo. O mejor dicho... muy poco lindo. Si alguna vez he leído un poema que trate sobre el rencor hacia lo humano, es esto. Gracias por darme la oportunidad de leerlo, Señorita Lobos. Nunca leo poesía, pero si cada vez que lo haga va a ser así de bueno, entonces fantástico.

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        ·  6 years ago 

      Oh, pues para mí es un enorme placer saber que lo releíste, lo disfrutaste y lo apreciaste. Muchas gracias por tan lindas palabras, Rick <3

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          ·  6 years ago 

        De nada <3

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            ·  6 years ago 

          Congratulations! This post has been upvoted from the communal account, @minnowsupport, by Elena [elelobos] from the Minnow Support Project. It's a witness project run by aggroed, ausbitbank, teamsteem, someguy123, neoxian, followbtcnews, and netuoso. The goal is to help Steemit grow by supporting Minnows. Please find us at the Peace, Abundance, and Liberty Network (PALnet) Discord Channel. It's a completely public and open space to all members of the Steemit community who voluntarily choose to be there.

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              ·  6 years ago 

            Hermoso, intenso. Me es difícil no identificarme con tus escritos, este, está muy bien logrado. Te felicito.
            Un abrazo bella @elelobos ;-)

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                ·  6 years ago (edited)

              Agradecida y súper halagada por tus palabras. Abrazos, bella <3

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                  ·  6 years ago 

                Este post ha sido votado por el proyecto @templo en colaboración con @steempress-io.

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                    ·  6 years ago 

                  Muchísimas gracias, Templo!! :D

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                      ·  6 years ago 

                    ¡Vaya nivel! Me gustan tus versos, se nota el cuidado que le pones en general. I like that!

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                        ·  6 years ago 

                      Me alegra que te gusten :D Gracias, Deyvis!

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                          ·  6 years ago 

                        Es que vos sabes como tocar el alma de quienes te leen... ¡Joder! Es inevitable no sentir asombro con lo que creas. Me encantó, Ele <3

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                            ·  6 years ago 

                          Ains, gracias, mi Psi ^^ Siempre es un placer enorme leer tus comentarios a mis post <3

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                              ·  6 years ago 

                            Extraordinaria poesía. Hermosa. Felicidades.

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                                ·  6 years ago 

                              Gracias, naborch. Saludos ^^

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                                  ·  6 years ago 

                                Me llegó... tus palabras siempre me dejan pensando por eso me encanta leerte, y te doy mi opinión por pvt! loviu!

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                                    ·  6 years ago 

                                  Gracias, mmg. Loviu tu.

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                                      ·  6 years ago 

                                    Este post ha sido votado por el equipo Cervantes en colaboración con Steemprees.

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                                        ·  6 years ago 

                                      Gracias gracias gracias <33333

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                                          ·  6 years ago 

                                        Me gusta mucho, porque lo escribiste lindo y porque el rojo me atrapa, tiendo a escribir de esta tonalidad y de sus derivados, mas en música que en poesía o en relatos, sin embargo de este enfoque es muy dificil, diria mortal.

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                                            ·  6 years ago 

                                          Pues definitivamente esta es una poesía mortal. El rojo era el color que debía usar.

                                          Gracias por tu visita, mi lindo <3

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                                              ·  6 years ago 

                                            Me han encantado tus letras rojas!! :)

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                                                ·  6 years ago 

                                              Eso me alegra mucho ^^

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                                                  ·  6 years ago (edited)

                                                Espectacular prosa, intensamente exqusita, habrá que hacer un matrimonio literario o algo parecido entre tus escritos y los mios, ya que me pasa igual que a ti, cada día que te leo me enamoro de vuestra pluma, Saludos, Bendciones y un abrazotote... ;-)

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                                                    ·  6 years ago (edited)

                                                  jajajajaj un matrimonio literario. Me encanta! xD Abrazos, mi querido amigo.

                                                  PD: Quiero que sepas que sigo atenta a tus publicaciones y aunque a veces no pueda votarte siempre trato de postular tu fantástico contenido en la colmena.

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                                                      ·  6 years ago 

                                                    Me sucede igual querida amiga, no puedo votar por tu apasionado trabajo como quisiera, este cambio de la plataforma no permite votar y comentar como uno quisiera, agradecido por vuestro apoyo en leeerme y postular mi contenido en otras comunidades, no tiene precio lo que haces por mi, Saludos en la distancia y Bendiciones... ;-)

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                                                        ·  6 years ago (edited)

                                                      Roja atrapada, llena amargura y de arrepentimiento.

                                                      brutal

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                                                          ·  6 years ago 

                                                        Gracias! :D Un abrazote ^^

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