aquella mañana de nuestra fingida despedida.
El cuarto ya estaba lleno de luz y ambos estábamos en esa pequeña cama
que fue testigo de tanto, nos abrazábamos como de costumbre.
Minutos antes se acostó y dijo ¨Quédate un rato más¨
cuando a mí me provocaba detener todo y quedarme para siempre;
con las montañas de fondo, su risa y esa melena que no conoce el orden.
Al final creo que si me quede para siempre,
al menos con las memorias de lo que fuimos.
La foto y el texto son de mi autoría.
La foto fue tomada con un samsung s4 mini.
Otras de mis publicaciones
Una nota por cada noche | Relato
Desencuentros | Poema
El día que menos te lo esperes me iré | Poema
Mi canal de Youtube
Me gusta, sigue escribiendo y adornando tus escritos con tu bella imagen, saludos
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Me hace muy feliz que me leas. ¡Saludos!
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Eres muy linda!
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¡Gracias! un abrazo.
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Dejate lo linda, es escritora y Steemian
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@asdrubal Solo fue un cumplido!
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Corto y preciso, con muy pocas palabras lograste describir lo que siento al recordar lo que algún día ella y y fuimos. Un beso y un abrazo preciosa.
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Gracias, es bonito que te sientas identificado. ¡Un abrazo!
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Puro amor en esos versos libres vale!!!
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Jajaja sí, qué te puedo decir, soy una romántica empedernida.
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You got a 7.72% upvote from @adriatik courtesy of @elocuenciadsnuda!
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Hola Lorena, tu poema es puro es amor, me gustó, está hermoso.
Particularmente me encantó este verso:
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Sí, ya tocaba publicar uno un poquito más romántico, entre tanta melancolía. ¡Saludos!
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Beautiful!
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¡Gracias!
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afffffff estassss bellaaaaaaa xDDDDDD
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Jaja gracias ¡Un abrazo!
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Si eres escritor te invito a participar en el concurso 1000 palabras, podrás darle un toque más único a tus escritos ;D
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Gracias, iré a ver de que trata.
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Escribes lindísimo. Estaré pendiente de leerte
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¡Gracias! nos estaremos leyendo, abrazos.
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