No Estás Muerta, Estás Herida...
Por la esperanza golpeada
que hoy te tiene afligida.
Por el hijo que te deja
y aunque se marcha, no te olvida.
Por la economía rentista
que te tiene destruida.
Por la gente que se muere
sin medicina y sin comida.
Por los niños, que su infancia
sienten que tienen perdida.
Por los viejos que en su lucha
ya no encuentran una salida.
Por tus calles, que demuestran
una "revolución" sin medida,
y la realidad golpea
a la ficción sabida.
Por sentir que por la borda
ayer fuiste arrojada.
Por favor, no te rindas...
¡mi pequeña Venecia amada!
Ora fuerte, sin cesar...
ya no te sientas perdida.
Venezuela, no estás muerta
tierra bendita, sólo estás herida...
muy buen poema
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Gracias @joabreu, :*
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Que bello erika 💕 muy cierto pece a todo nuestra tierra esta bendita.. Y afortunadamente no hay mal que dure cien años..
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Así es amiga @annaolmos, esta no es una enfermedad mortal, Venezuela va a sanar.
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Que hermoso @erikapda, me llego al alma tu poema.
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Es bueno saberlo. Un fuerte abrazo @karolines. ¡Saludos!
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Muy fuertes tus palabras! Saludos!
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@vicmir gracias por tu comentario, después de muchos comentarios escuchados y leídos de lo que le espera a mi país, plasme mi sentir en este poema... Sigo confiando y sé que de estas heridas, mi país no se va a morir.
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Buena reflexión acorde con la realidad , te felicito hermano y no perdamos la fe, no hay mal que dure mil años, saludos @wendyth16
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Gracias amiga, claro que no debemos perder la fe. Venezuela no está muerta, ¡sólo está herida! Y va a sanar.
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Que belloooo, me identifique con esto de verdad
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Gracias amiga, ¡saludos!
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@erikapda Wow mujer que excelente fuerte abrazo... te amo Venezuela.
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¡Gracias amigo! Venezuela está de pie... ¡Saludos!
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Cuanto sentimiento. Creo que este poema es un granito de esperanza ante tantos malos pesares que estamos viviendo.
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Así es, muchas gracias por tomarte el tiempo para leerlo.
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Excelente, poema que describe muy bien lo que padece nuestro país. La esperanza no está perdida, si se puede.
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Muchas gracias @jhonboss, estoy totalmente contigo. Mientras hay esperanza, hay vida.
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Qué hermoso, vale. Gracias por compartirlo.
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Gracias a ti por leerlo @marynessc ¡saludos!
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Excelente poema . Dios te Bendiga.
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Gracias amigo @jpolanco, bendiciones para ti.
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La palabra es el arma de los poetas y con ella construimos el mundo que soñamos y lo defendemos con la fuerza de la poesía. Abrazos @erikapda
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Gracias @silher, tal como lo escribes. Abrazos retornados...
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Hermosas palabras como siempre, no hay que perder la fe y seguir siendo participes de la construccion de un pais mejor
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Así es amigo @socram95, sin bajar los brazos...
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Buen poema nena, te felicito.
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Gracias amiga @elemarg25, que bueno que te gustó...
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Excelentes palabras sobre venezuela, es grande el sentimiento que tenemos todos los venezolanos por nuestro país que pronto saldrá de ésta oscuridad!
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Así será, en el nombre de Dios. Gracias por tu comentario @dulce.amor
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Bonito poema.
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Gracias, ¡que bueno que te guste!
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¡Que hermoso poema! Fuerza Venezuela.
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¡Gracias! Un abrazo @danifranco30
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